Post 3: To Pieces (Discworld fan fiction, Mal/Susan)

[latin_doll]

Fan fiction!

Title: To Pieces (English)

Fandom: Discworld (Monstrous Regiment and the Susan books. Thief of Time, mainly. Spoilers for MR.)

Summary: One can learn how to deal with the unbearable. Ahahaha.

Notes: Rated very M for sex (creepy sex! Light bondage!). Mal/Susan, Mal/Polly. 1366 words. X-posted to cheesemongers.

Comments

[law_nerd]

Stunned silence and tears seem like a more appropriate comment than words could be.

She believes in a fixed amount of pain for everyone, and wants to get it over with.

Brilliant. The whole thing is brilliant, but that line ... and "Polly-shaped nothing" ... are perfect encapsulations of heart-break.

[latin_doll]

Eee. I'm glad you like the story, and thank you for commenting :)