homecoming and other horror stories (Ryan)

[dollsome]

Title: homecoming and other horror stories
Character/Pairing: Ryan, with some hints at Ryan/Kelly and . . . Ryan/Michael?
Spoilers: through "The Job," as well as very slight ones for this promo
Word Count: 1,540
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Ryan’s return to the Scranton branch doesn’t go exactly as planned, which he probably should’ve seen coming.
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[snoopypez]

Oh man. OH MAN. This is basically the most perfect thing I have read in a loooong time. I know all I seem to do is gush in these comments, but holy crap! It never fails to amaze me how well you write everyone. And Ryan's confusion over Kelly not being a mess and not rambling.. oh, YES. And he and Michael both liking the show and Michael asking about the stubble and totally hitting on him and and and jdkjfldkajldskfla.

Seriously, I couldn't quote just one bit of that Michael part. Because, YES. I'm actually kinda.. sad how newly obsessed I am with them. Damn deleted scenes.

He doesn’t think he’ll be making out with Michael in the Chili’s parking lot anytime soon, but seriously - who knows?

DSHDSFJOS HEEEEEEEEE!!!

And that ending. Dude. Best last sentence ever, kinda. Whoa.

Did I mention I am amazed? :D

(geez, I need to use a different icon than this.)

[dollsome]

Ahaha, yay! :D I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I was sort of writing it with you in mind; I know how you love that mancrush. (And dude, who doesn't? Only people with no souls, that's who!!)

Thank you oh so very much!

[dollsome]

Aw, thank you so much. :)

[greenfish]

Yea! I totally, totally love this. First of all, your Michael just had me dying. Of course he wouldn't get Flight of the Conchords. And his interaction with Ryan is just so hilarious. I just like the way you tendered Ryan here - he's sort of self-obsessed, yet self-conscious at the time, if that makes sense. Like, he wants to look good to other people, but he just manages to come off as awkward. And you captured that essence of Ryan so well. This is a great little piece!

[dollsome]

Aw, thank you so much! :) I always really, really like writing Ryan -- self-obsessed, yet self-conscious at the time totally sums it up, and that's so fun to play around with.

[comiskey]

I really enjoyed reading this. Michael was crazy and hilarious as usual. Kelly's reaction to seeing Ryan was spot on and the way her not being affected affected him so much was great. I liked that Jan made an appearance and their awkward conversation was wonderful. And I liked how Ryan thought about how getting bleeped would be cool. Great job!

[dollsome]

Aw, thank you so much! :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[dollsome]

THANKS THANKS THANKS. :D