thus with(out) a kiss (Rory/Paris)

[dollsome]

thus with(out) a kiss - Gilmore Girls ; Rory/Paris ; for the prompt 'paris & rory - romeo & juliet' at the ladyloves! comment ficathon. Set after 2.09 - "Run Away, Little Boy."

Comments

[ozmissage]

Aww, this is so lovely! You have such a way with the Gilmore-esque dialogue. <333

[streussal]

"Don't think this means I'm not going to destroy you someday, Gilmore," Paris says, but she sounds a little too soft to mean it, her breath light but there against Rory's neck.

"Rightio, champ," Rory says, and pats her awkwardly on the back. (Don't spook the horses.)

Yes. And Rory's rambling and Paris academic superiority - great job!

[femme_slash_fan]

I think I just Lorelai'd a little.

Lorelai'd = Verb. Meaning to dork magnificently.

[weekendsinner]

Ahh, I love this! The dialogue is hilarious, and Rory's thoughts are spot-on. Well done! :)

[osprey_archer]

Not enough love in the world for this! Hearts in my eyes for Rory/Paris. You have their voices down pat: Rory rambling off on tangents, and Paris and her bluntness and epic intensity. It was basically slapping verisimilitude in the face with a glove.

I read through the fic again to pick out my favorite parts to quote, but then I realized I would be quoting half the fic, and you would get bored.