Comments | dollsome: no one to warn me, no hand to touch me (Morgana)

dollsome

no one to warn me, no hand to touch me (Morgana)

Oct 17, 2011 11:24

Title: no one to warn me, no hand to touch me
Pairings: Morgana & Uther, Morgana & Arthur
Spoilers: through 4.03 "The Wicked Day"
Word Count: 621
Summary: She feels it.

( When she was eleven, she threw a goblet at Arthur's head and did not miss. )

fic: uther/morgana, fic: arthur/morgana, merlin, fanfiction, fic: merlin

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dollsome October 18 2011, 01:41:41 UTC

Thank youuuuu! <3

luxorien October 18 2011, 01:00:55 UTC

I'm not even particularly into Morgana as a character, but this is exceptional. Love the parallelisms and the depth you give her.

dollsome October 18 2011, 01:41:18 UTC

Thank you so much!

firthgal October 18 2011, 15:28:54 UTC

Oh, gosh, thank you for giving Morgana the depth that I so wanted the show to give her. I loved the scene from the past and how it was the first time she had felt like a part of the family, and how it's that moment that haunts her during Uther's death, and oh this bit was so utterly brilliant:

“That may be sooner than you think. Arthur is young. Untested. He will look to his trusted uncle for council, and I will ensure that he fails.”

She thinks of bending down to give Arthur her hand. Pulling him to his feet, so that he might stand beside her. Can you feel that? she wonders, stupidly, and ought to hope he doesn’t.

Oh, Morgana. *sniff*

archaeologist_d October 18 2011, 15:59:45 UTC

Oh, loved the background on Morgana beating Arthur and then the parallels of her all grown up and murdering her father. Loved it.

onlifeboats October 18 2011, 16:03:35 UTC

This is beautifully written! ♥ (Brb, rummaging through your journal to see what other gems I can find.)