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Within Reach (Adelle/Claire, NC-17)

Apr 29, 2009 10:17

Title: Within Reach
Author: Lexus
Pairing: Adelle/Claire
Rating: NC-17
Challenge: 011 - Reach
Spoilers: 'Needs', 'A Spy In The House Of Love'
Disclaimer: I don't own the characters or the Dollhouse. No money being made, no copyright infringement intended.
( Within Reach )

length: one-shot (1000 or more words), challenge 011, rating: nc-17 (frao), pairing: adelle/claire

Comments 5

kgx2001 April 29 2009, 23:14:07 UTC

Wow...this is incredibly well written. I love the voice you give to Claire. Excellent pairing--hope you write more of them!

lexus_grey April 29 2009, 23:19:21 UTC

Thank you! This was my first shot at writing Claire, so I'm glad she came across well.

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lexus_grey April 30 2009, 19:19:47 UTC

Wow, thank you! That's a really great compliment :) I'm glad you liked it, and I'm glad you thought they were realistic, I was trying for that. =D

more! anonymous April 30 2009, 23:40:27 UTC

seriously. if you continue this i will...i don't know...offer you my eternal love and devotion? hell, even if you don't continue this particular story PLEASE write this pairing again.

dollhouse seriously needs more femslash. more adelle femslash in particular because she is an absolutely delicious character. the good doctor ain't bad herself either.

great job capturing their voices and their shifting dynamic, too.

ladyvivien January 27 2010, 23:47:18 UTC

I realised I'd never commented on this before, but it's one of my absolute favourite fics! Claire is strong whilst still being in character, and Adelle's neediness is just delicious.