Overtime (PG-13, Ivy/Topher)

May 02, 2010 15:36

Title: Overtime
Author: Sami
Fandom: Dollhouse
Pairing: Ivy/Topher
Summary: Its just another night at the Dollhouse for Ivy and Topher.
Notes: This was written for Jackie yukikyo and it was inspired by her prompt Topher/any Female, bath time, post imprint,Nothing past S2E1. I'm sorry that the rating isn't higher! I hope that you enjoy this little slice ( Read more... )

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rodlox May 3 2010, 02:03:22 UTC
splendid and enjoyable.

Ivy's always great to read, and you write her well.

> she didn't want to stay late wiping Victor because he learned to analyze a web-show.
:D :D

one nitpick: the guard Roy might be asking them clocking out questions. (you missed the L ) easy mistake.

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staringiscaring May 3 2010, 03:00:05 UTC
Thanks you so much for your comment! Its good to know that I got a good grasp on Ivy. I wished we could have seen more of her, but thats Fox's fault.

And thanks for nitpicking that amusing typo. Cocking out. Lol.

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otahyoni May 3 2010, 14:47:44 UTC
Very fun! :) I always like seeing Ivy's take on things.

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staringiscaring May 3 2010, 22:03:23 UTC
Thank you so much!

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duh_i_read May 5 2010, 04:02:17 UTC
I love this, and Topher and Ivy here are sooo cute! The ending just melted my heart.

I loved the line more then I can say “Dr. Horrible had a lonely heart.”.

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staringiscaring May 5 2010, 04:09:21 UTC
Thank you! Its good to know that my fic had such an effect. thanks again for commenting.

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yukikyo October 5 2010, 22:48:08 UTC
I'm such a horrible person! I'm so sorry for not commenting sooner. What a great story! Thank you so so much for writing this!

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staringiscaring October 5 2010, 23:24:52 UTC
No problem. I'm glad you liked it, however belatedly. :D

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rodlox November 1 2011, 03:33:11 UTC
very enjoyable. sad I didn't read this before.(or didn't remember reading it)

you write Ivy superbly.

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staringiscaring November 1 2011, 03:51:23 UTC
Hahaha, its fine! You left a wonderful comment before and that was enough. I'm glad you like my Ivy voice. She's the character on the show that I seem to write the most. I wish we saw more of her.

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