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chinchuu August 3 2009, 22:40:26 UTC
This made me wanna cry. It was beautiful.

And you leave him at the bus stop, hands twisting nervously in your lap as you finally let him understand what it feels like to watch a bus disappear into traffic, unable to stop it.
♥♥♥

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jonghyun August 3 2009, 23:28:48 UTC

ASKLKALJONGYU! OMG I'VE BEEN CRAVING IT FOR SO LONG, THANK YOU ;A;
this is just so beautiful, the balcony scenes and everything and jonghyun is so jonghyun. i love it♥

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aka_theen August 4 2009, 00:16:59 UTC
Oh yaaay jongyu!!
This is really beautiful, and i think onew's feeling towards jonghyun is so deep,
beautiful, beautifully written, thumbs up! *i'm a big fan of your writings, really! :)*

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nautisch August 4 2009, 03:50:05 UTC
sdlkfg JONGYU. I automatically love you for writing them and writing them SO. WELL.

dying Onew is such a cute, awkward little geek and Jonghyun is so sincere and honestly, I really love your characterization of him. Of both of them, actually, because Onew is precious.

“You have no idea how long,” he breathes into you, ghosting across your cheek. “How long I’ve. About you. So, so long.”

“Me too,” you say, pushing forward into the kiss again.

So maybe life’s not perfect and maybe his ex-girlfriend will hate you and maybe you’re just naïve and stupid and too young to know what love is, but you think you’ve found it anyway, you think you understand a little more now.
bawww. :')

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acrosstherug August 4 2009, 11:12:19 UTC
ASDFGHJKL;
JONGYU.
I haven't read any in a long while so ♥_♥
I loved how there was that build up when we kinda know but they don't and we're dying to tell them to fall in love already and when they finally do the fireworks won't stop and the world celebrates and I LOVE THIS.
Don't ever stop writing.

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