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SHINee Fic: JongYu

Sep 19, 2009 21:50

hidden in bed sheets
jonghyun/jinki, porn
( first we're too young, then we're too old. is there ever an in between? )

Comments 14

coffee_appeal September 20 2009, 04:48:46 UTC

APPROVED. WOW. JONGYU IS APPROVAL IN MY BOOK <3

THAT WAS FUCKING SEXY SHIT, DUDE. OMG. WOW. LOL. I CAN'T BREATH? LOLOLOL.

nautisch September 20 2009, 06:21:00 UTC

I don't think I've ever found any Jongyu smut. and uh, goddamn was that hot. and it's so in character and I feel like their relationship is just...perfect here. and I think I'll stop here because dubulove has pretty much summarized how I feel about this fic. yeah. I loved this. :D

phasera September 20 2009, 06:29:13 UTC

YES YOU HAVE CERTAINLY EARNED YOUR NC-17 STRIPES, MY DEAR. 8D 8D 8D A++++

so happy you decided to post this because now i can BOOKMARK IT FOREVER AND BEYOND, YAAAAAY. \o/

she_devil666 September 20 2009, 07:20:20 UTC

<333~!!

thank you for giving me smutty jongyu~! jjong is not in enough smut period >.> i really should pick up writing again to help rectify this wrong...

i can't picture jongyu without some fail even with smut 'cause that's just how they are XD

andivide September 20 2009, 08:03:29 UTC

Except for maybe that they're in love - stupidly, irrevocably, undeniably in love - and well.

/SMASHESTHISLINESOHARD//.../,.,.af,lknjklklakl

i love the word "irrevocably." i love it when used to describe love. I LOVE YOU FOR USING IT.

this was so cute and also sexy (i don't ever use this word BE PROUD OF YOURSELF) in the way that it's not incredibly graphic, it just leaves enough to the imagination. i love that onew is still fail even during sexual activity, but not oblivious and innocent, just awkward. and onew babbling and jonghyun without even being touched and kaasfjkn.

they are quickly becoming my favorite pairing due to writers like you. ♥