Comments | dokunwakuai: SHINee Fic: OnKey

heechul_oppa in dokunwakuai

SHINee Fic: OnKey

Sep 04, 2009 02:38

do you have a map? because i'm lost in your eyes.
onew/key, romance
( of innocence, corporate stick-in-the-muds, a deprived college dropout, and one stripper that changed everything. )

p: onkey

Comments 33

jaybomb September 4 2009, 07:45:55 UTC

✖ 재재 ✖ says:
lol i'm not leaving
OH GOD IT'S PERFECT
Sarah says:
LOL
which part?
✖ 재재 ✖ says:
EVERYTING
YOU TOTALLY CAPTURED WHAT I WAS TRYING TO SAY
/envies
Sarah says:
;__________; you get full credit for that part
jsyk
✖ 재재 ✖ says:

boucbbcuoeuvruwer
this fic
can i like marry it
Sarah says:
:'DDD this fic is, like. lol. OUR MIND BABY. :'DDD I...came up with nothing. at all. seriously. the stripper part was noel's fault and everything else....was all you.
:'D

You lie, I could never do this AAAAAAAHHHHHH. No seriously though you executed everything so impeccably and I ENVY YOU SO HARD argh. If Key was a stripper and Onew was a business man this is exactly what would happen, I swear it.

AND THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THE SECKS WAS EXACTLY WHAT I ASKED FOR. ♥

heechul_oppa September 4 2009, 07:48:25 UTC

LOLOLOLOL. :'DDD You shouldn't envy me. I write shit like this when I should be writing essays. ;____; BUT A;SDE;JFALKSD. Our mind children are brilliant. :DDDDDD

OH GAWD, I CANNOT WRITE SEX THOUGH. Idk...if they even had sex. People...can decide that on their own. LOL.

jaybomb September 4 2009, 07:57:43 UTC

SHUDDUP YOU'RE ONE OF THE BEST IH8U. If I had your writing abilities I might actually write fic =P SCREW WRITING FIC, I'LL HAVE YOU WRITE EVERYTHING.

pffft shuddup you did just fine. it's onkey secks and it's what I wanted. >|

tofukimster26 September 4 2009, 08:14:30 UTC

SPOT!!!! it's been a while since the last time someone write onkey smut lol

phasera September 4 2009, 08:23:58 UTC

OH MY GOSH HOW DID YOU MANAGE TO MAKE STRIPPER!AU THE MOST ADORABLE THING EVER. LIKE, REALLY, HOW. AND KEY IS SO FREAKING PRECIOUS. OHMYGOSH. AND ONEW AJDSHSJHDFK.

clearly i have nothing coherent to say. ;~; b-but i love this so hard.

heechul_oppa September 4 2009, 08:34:14 UTC

;______________________;

idkkkkkk. ONEW IS NATURALLY ADORABLE, SO. LOL. ♥

TBH, I barely remember half of what I wrote in this fic. :'D I AM SO SLEEPY. Haha~ IDK why I'm still up.

ciel_dao September 4 2009, 09:00:15 UTC

as they both fall a little closer to something like love-at-first-sight because fate, she can be quite the match maker.

THIS, was absolutely amazing (more amazing than the rest! which was just as sweet and awesome because greasy-ish Jonghyun?) I love that it's not quite finished yet, as most things are in real life :)

rinni1905 September 4 2009, 09:35:46 UTC

Sorry, I dun know how to make a long comment when I read such a good fanfic like this.

But I love your idea and writing style.^^

This fic is so... *speechless*

I hope I can read more from you

:(. I'm so suck....