Why Does It Cry by Enemytosleep [oneshot #65]

Mar 02, 2011 08:44

Title: Why Does It Cry?
Author: enemytosleep

Word Count: 1,036
Rating: PG
Characters: Kagome, Sesshoumaru
Prompt: dokuga_contest - Prison

Summary: Kagome feels trapped.

Warnings: previous character death mentioned, angst, potential end of series spoiler
Notes: Anyone following my recent drabbles at the different groups may notice I've decided to change a ( Read more... )

-drama, -canon universe, =oneshot, 2011 1q, enemytosleep
, -angst, =oneshot #065 prison

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firehauke March 3 2011, 01:50:49 UTC
curiouser and curiouser - many questions begat from this entry!

All in all, good!

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enemytosleep March 3 2011, 03:06:45 UTC
Hopefully it wasn't too bad out of context? These will eventually all be put together to form a proper story (I've been working on doing that as well).

But thanks!

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firehauke March 3 2011, 06:11:16 UTC
No, not too bad! The hints keep things interesting, so being slightly 'out of context' is a good thing.

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replicantangel March 14 2011, 06:14:52 UTC
Poor Kagome! Sesshoumaru will make it all better eventually, I hope. ;)

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enemytosleep March 14 2011, 15:36:20 UTC
Kagome's a tough cookie. She'll get through. :)

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hedda_1 March 14 2011, 14:16:35 UTC
I think you captured her emotions quite well. Touching. =)

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enemytosleep March 14 2011, 15:36:53 UTC
Thanks; she certainly had a lot of emotions to try and portray.

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pos_sess_ed March 14 2011, 18:40:17 UTC
"I'm such a mess," she said, shoulders sagging.

"You usually are," he agreed, "though not always this bad."

LOL! He's such a charmer to the damsel in distress.

Wonderful continuation, I can't wait to read more!

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enemytosleep March 14 2011, 21:29:26 UTC
What? He was speaking the truth! And your cheerleading really helps keep me motivated. Thank you. :3

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anonymous May 1 2011, 14:02:18 UTC
enemytosleep May 1 2011, 15:38:19 UTC
Thank you!

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hairann May 1 2011, 18:57:55 UTC
You're welcome :)

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