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Winter by Miss Anna [the Seasons Challenge]

Dec 07, 2010 14:43

Title: Winter
Author: Miss Anna
Theme: Winter -- The Seasons Challenge
Word Count: 6,021 (Four Chapters + Author Notes, around 1,020 for actually story part per chapter)
AU/CU: AU
Rating: M
Genre: Angst/Dark/Drama/Tragedy
Warnings: Character death and minor cursing.

Summary: She was dead, her brother had taken her from this world. Though through her death ( Read more... )

-alternate universe, -angst, miss anna s, -tragedy, *seasons challenge, 2010 4q, -dark!fic, -drama

Comments 6

themikoshivae December 7 2010, 22:09:21 UTC

why do flamers always go anon(or not logged in)? xD i mean.. when i review with concrit, i will always log in so you know who is critiquing. i would only expect the same of others with my stories.

awesome story anyways, no matter what anyone else says <3

missannastar December 8 2010, 00:12:16 UTC

Thank you so much for you awesome comment ^-^

Agreed...
The person whoever they maybe have also left reviews on other stories, by some really great authors doing the same thing making the flames thinly veiled reviews.

shiratsuki_chan December 8 2010, 00:57:59 UTC

I think you're confusing a flame with a critique. I read the review for myself and it was a lot tamer than I thought it'd be. The reviewer's wording may have been a bit harsh, but they weren't wrong to point out what they did. You shouldn't take it as a flame or an insult (so long as it isn't one, of course), but perhaps consider it or make use of it to improve your writing. :D

missannastar December 8 2010, 02:38:52 UTC

That's why I put sortof flame due to how they actually put the review since they offered critique instead of just coming out to say that they didn't like what I wrote.
For what I said I honestly just meant for people to consider what they say in a review before hitting submit to any story not only mine because it is up for interpretation

themikoshivae December 8 2010, 03:43:52 UTC

i have to agree.. it wasn't a full on flame like i have seen.. but it was overly harsh..

besides, if all people did was comment on the bad parts of the story, a lot of people would stop writing, instead of trying to improve.

that's why even when you do concrit, always put what you liked in as well, it makes the crit seem like tips, rather than an attack on the person.

that and it makes them feel good about what they did *nods* and that's what really matters in the end.

forthrightly January 12 2011, 06:13:08 UTC

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