He Did What! by Miss Anna [Drabble #117]

[missannastar]

Title: He Did What!
Author: Miss Anna
Prompt: #117--Ripped
Word Count: 100
AU/CU: AU
Genre: Humor
Rating: T+
Warning(s): None

Author Note: This doesn't fit in with any of my drabble collections thus far so this is just a stand alone drabble that shall be added to my WP Diary on Dokuga.

Summary: He did what? Are you serious? The look on her face must have

Comments

[themikoshivae]

Bwahahahahaha Thats what the wind witch deserves!

Just a few things:

I feel the first dead is a bit much.. normally when asking that questions, it's always
"Are you serious?" though some potty mouth people say "are you F***ing Serious?", dead serious to me just does not fit or feel right, though it is great the second time around. you could probably get away with replacing the first dead with the above mentioned curse ^.^ Only other little bit, is that i feel there should be a comma after the word expression. *nods*

very awesome overall, and i wish i could see Kagura's face! xD

[missannastar]

Thank you for the suggests and I have made the changes, -bows-. The story/drabble reads better now so thank you sooo much for the tips ^-^

[themikoshivae]

*bows* you are very welcome :D

the cursing makes me think she is gonna pull out the boomerang. xD

*karate chops*

[pos_sess_ed]

LOL! Where is YouTube when I need it!?! I would have liked to have seen that too!

[missannastar]

Heheh Agreed lol
I was thinking about starting a 'Jerry Springer' drabble collection lol