Plaything by Linay [Oneshot #54 - Make Believe]

[l_i_n_a_y]

Title:  Plaything
Author: Linay
Theme: Make Believe - Oneshot #54
Genre: Dark, Romance
Rating: Mature
Warnings: Violence, mild sexual innuendo and awkward moments between our unwilling heroes
Word Count: 1707
Summary: [Canon universe, continuation]. They meet again - but not as allies or equals. This is the first installment in a new serial I am

Comments

[lin_yun]

I LOVE it!!! OMG, you certainly do know how to start an interesting series, and to keep readers pining for more.

*happy dance* can't wait for more~

Just a tiny note, in case you are very specific about Japanese terms, as some people are. "Oni-san" would be "Mr. Ogre/Monster", but "onii-san" (2 I's) would be elder brother. (Just remember "oni" is a word by itself, but elder brother can be further made more familiar by cutting out the respective 'o' and just saying 'nii-san'.)

On a last note, I can almost *see* Kagome wearing Yumi's clothes.... ^_^

[l_i_n_a_y]

Ha ha...thanks for that (onii vs oni). I meant "brother"; although, "ogre" fits this chapter pretty well tee hee...

Glad you see exactly what I do with the clothes. :)

[replicantangel]

Wow! He's being pretty vicious. I'm looking forward to more, if only to explain how they arrived at this terrifying scene!

Awesome job. :)

[l_i_n_a_y]

Thanks :) Vicious...I am so going to use that word in the next chapter - it describes exactly what I'm trying for :)

[jenineji]

This is absolutely wonderful!

[l_i_n_a_y]

Thanks :)

[esmooria]

So very intriguing! I can't wait for more!