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Have Faith by LordRandallsLady [Drabble #67]

Dec 27, 2009 16:23

Title: Have Faith
Author: LordRandallsLady
Theme: Sever (Drabble #67)
Genre: CU, Angst
Rating: K
Word Count: 100
Warnings: None
Summary: Rin gives Kagome reason to hope.
AN: A companion piece to Loss.

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-canon universe, =drabble, 2009 4q, =drabble #067 sever, -angst, lordrandallslady

Comments 10

epicfailonline December 28 2009, 02:09:12 UTC

What?! What about Inuyasha?! O.O What's happening?!
Must ... continue ...

lrdrandallslady December 28 2009, 02:44:54 UTC

We'll have to see. I have some ideas for more, but I still need to flesh it out.

As for Inu, I don't know where he is at this point. Haven't figured that out yet.

lin_yun December 28 2009, 02:39:14 UTC

Nice! I went and read Loss, too. And actually, I like this one more~ =^^= Not that they aren't BOTH good.

lrdrandallslady December 28 2009, 02:45:10 UTC

Awww...thanks!

tnew78 December 28 2009, 03:42:22 UTC

I like this one because it stands alone...leaving you wondering what happened before and what's going to happen afterward. Even without the continuation (which I didn't know you'd included until here), I loved it. As much as you want to classify it as angst, I can't help but be drawn to the fluff and awe of the moment--but, as we said earlier--that's what you get for including Rin. :)

BTW, using this as a continuance for Loss is perfect.

lrdrandallslady December 28 2009, 05:41:35 UTC

*bows* Thank you! I have to agree that it's hard to not feel a bit fluffy when Rin is involved. She's just so darn cute, as is her idol worship.

sunsingergirl December 28 2009, 05:51:28 UTC

Continuation FTW!!!

I loved Loss, and I'm glad that you're going to continue it - it was so stirring, and so is this, though it seems a bit... tamer, ya know? :/ Anyway! Great job! This struck a strange sort of angsty WAFF for me. XD

lrdrandallslady December 28 2009, 06:58:01 UTC

Thank you very much!

I have been toying with the idea of continuing "Loss" for a while, and yes, this is more tame, mostly I think because it's a more grown up Kags. I don't see her breaking down into sniveling tears like she did at 15. And you are not the only to mention angsty WAFF; LC did also. We're blaming it on Rin ;).

As to whether or not it will go further than this remains to be seen.

replicantangel December 31 2009, 06:15:43 UTC

Rin is always right when it comes to Sesshoumaru. :) I hope you continue this!

lrdrandallslady December 31 2009, 06:40:01 UTC

Most kids are right about adults. It's too bad we don't listen to them more often.

I have some rough ideas for continuing the story, but they are VERY rough. I leave it to the muse at this point, but part of me also hopes that she allows the story to continue :)