Trapped Parents by piratequeen0405 [Drabble #37]

Jun 01, 2009 21:59


Title: Trapped Parents
Author: piratequeen0405
Theme: Cobweb
Genre: AU, Drama
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Word Count: 300
Summary: Sesshoumaru’s parents discuss his situation; continuation of drabble series 
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4796678/1/Outmatched

Trapped Parents )

-drama, -alternate universe, =drabble #037 cobweb, 2009 3q, =drabble, piratequeen0405

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landofthekwt June 2 2009, 14:13:05 UTC
Interesting that they both actually agree that Kagome is the right person for him and that they both do not want him to end up like they did. Your couple is more civilized toward each other than many of the divorcees that I have met. Very refreshing characterizations. Not what I was expecting.

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piratequeen0405 June 2 2009, 14:47:08 UTC
Not too unrealistic, I hope! Perhaps time has given them the distance they need to treat each other rationally. Glad you like the characterizations--I wasn't really interested in making anyone a villain for this story...just a little speed bump.

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jennabean_dp June 2 2009, 15:34:03 UTC
Ha! The parents are now involved, there's no turning back, lol! Nice to see that his father is the rational thinker here, looks like inumama is starting to see the light; now if only Sesshoumaru would...

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piratequeen0405 June 2 2009, 22:26:13 UTC
Don't forget Kagome! She might not want to have anything to do with him now.

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beermoney5 June 2 2009, 17:14:03 UTC
Daddy to the rescue. Hopfully Sesshomaru's mother will relent picking a mate for him.

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piratequeen0405 June 2 2009, 22:27:20 UTC
He's not exactly interfering--just acting the voice of reason.

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slycats June 3 2009, 23:08:14 UTC
Like your use of the cobweb theme.

I don't understand one thing.....
“He was dating someone seriously,” he said, quiet and solemn. “And he was happy with her.”

“A human?” she scoffed. “You know that’s not the Taiyoukai way.”

... Kagome is a human and Sesshomaru's mother is agreeing to him mating her??

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piratequeen0405 June 4 2009, 00:50:46 UTC
I think she's not agreeing to anything, just acknowledging that he's right--she doesn't want to meet Kagome and find her worthy.

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snow_fall June 4 2009, 23:21:20 UTC
Hm, even if Mommy Dearest backs down, I'm not sure that Kagome would want him anymore. I wouldn't. Plus, he is still worried about losing everything over mating a human. Even if his mother backs down, he may not. Perplexing. The suspense is fun. ^_^ Thanks. This is a great little piece.

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piratequeen0405 June 5 2009, 02:53:05 UTC
Glad you like it--I'm having fun with it too, especially not knowing exactly how it's going to go until the prompt is announced...still trying to figure where to take it next.

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