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Just Shut Up And Kiss Me by MomoDesu [Drabble #24]

Feb 27, 2009 20:57

Title: Shut Up And Kiss Me
Author: MomoDesu (bblackdahliaTheme: Clock ( Read more... )

-canon universe, =drabble #024 clock, -romance, =drabble, 2009 2q, momodesu

Comments 10

tnew78 February 28 2009, 02:10:53 UTC

OH, MOMO!! I loved it! The interaction between the two of them, the back and forth conversing, was beautifully done. I wore a smile the entire time I read this piece!

LC

mom0desu February 28 2009, 02:19:44 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! I haven't written anything in so long I was worried.

niftypaint24 February 28 2009, 03:28:20 UTC

Lol! Very cute! I loved their interaction. Nicely done!!

mom0desu February 28 2009, 03:31:51 UTC

Thanks!

luxken27 February 28 2009, 22:44:55 UTC

Hehe, I love their conversation, just the right hint of snarkiness, melting with the right hint at the end :) Nicely done!

mom0desu March 2 2009, 00:38:43 UTC

Show's I've been too deep in Snape fiction lately. I couldn't keep the snark out ^^

jennabean_dp March 1 2009, 00:18:50 UTC

Ha ha, such teases! Too cute :)

mom0desu March 2 2009, 00:40:00 UTC

Think of it as foreplay XD

(I had to delete the last comment, so I apologize if you get multiple email notifications. Momo just happens to fail at spelling this evening ^^)

pos_sess_ed March 3 2009, 02:38:25 UTC

The dialogue is very cute! It really gives the feel of a comfortable relationship between the two.

I love she tells him her lips are lonely, and he tells her his eyes are busy at the moment... LMAO!!!