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Distracting [Drabble 177]

Feb 09, 2012 00:09

Title: Distracting
Author: lemontreeleaves
Genre: Romance, humour
Rating: T
Word Count: 100
Prompt: Dense
Universe: Modern times (AU/AR)
Summary: In which Sesshomaru proves that he can be every bit as distracting as his brother, especially when he wants to be.

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-alternate universe, -romance, -comedy, =drabble #177 dense, 2012 1q, =drabble, lemontreeleaves

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addictedgazette February 13 2012, 14:04:25 UTC

HAHA! I love this! Way to be a tease Sesshomaru!

lemontreeleaves February 13 2012, 16:32:25 UTC

Thank-you! There was so much that I wound up having to cut out of it, I was worried that the effect wouldn't be the same. XD

And I know. Picture it! O.O It might sound weird to have him doing yoga but the mental images make me happy. XD

addictedgazette February 13 2012, 17:24:30 UTC

Haha I know that feeling. Its always I'm done...Im over word count....what CAN I cut?? Having not seen it at its best, I cant jude accurately but I think the point got across.

I did picture it! It was lovely. I think I could see him doing yoga. It's a type of exercise after all and Sesshy-sama I think is FIT. *wiggles brows* haha

lemontreeleaves February 13 2012, 18:51:52 UTC

I thought the word count was 200, so I edited it down and then had to cut it back again. I had like OppenOffice open in three windows, I was cutting and pasting, rewording, meshing stuff together. Usually drabbles are so simple, but this time I was ALL over the place. XD Haha, thanks. As long as it works in the end, right?

FIT indeed. *suggestive smirk* I think picturing him doing almost anything can make me squee.

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