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Master and Slave by hedda_1 [Drabble #174]

Jan 22, 2012 22:46

Title: Master and Slave
Author: Hedda
Theme: Coin
Genre: Drama, Dark
Rating: T
Warnings: Crude language, but only a little.
Word Count: 400
Summary: Sometimes we are not master of our own fate...
A/N: Started out as a poem, then I wrote prose. That didn't play out very well, so I continued the poem and returned ultimately to this form again.. I may finish ( Read more... )

=drabble #174 coin, -drama, -dark!fic, -canon universe, 2012 1q, =drabble, hedda_1

Comments 8

neisha00 January 23 2012, 03:59:01 UTC

Oh- I wasn't expecting that, lol.

hedda_1 January 23 2012, 08:14:31 UTC

Then I consider myself successful. ^^

adelaleigh January 23 2012, 04:53:22 UTC

Ooo, interesting use of prompt!

hedda_1 January 23 2012, 08:15:08 UTC

Thank you. :)

janaegee January 24 2012, 02:58:59 UTC

I really like this!

hedda_1 January 24 2012, 08:23:38 UTC

Thank you. =)

archaic_tears January 26 2012, 03:04:20 UTC

This was really awesome to read! It made me think of Harvey Dent from Batman. Ya, I know wrong fandom but I'm a bit of a Twoface fan, haha! Great imagery btw and I loved the point of view used here to tell the story. Excellent!

hedda_1 January 26 2012, 08:00:16 UTC

Now that is an interesting comparison. I can see, why you'd think that.

And thank you for your kind review! =)