Frozen Fate 7/?

[dokssuri]

Title: Frozen Fate
Pairing: Changmin/Junsu
Summary: Junsu is living a carefree, comfortable life in his father’s orchards, planning a big adventure. Everything changes when it is decided that the Prince of Ice will marry a son of one of the southern lords. Junsu learns that sometimes life pushes you in an unexpected direction, and fighting it only

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[n3uromanc3r]

Oooh I don't think Junsu lied, he wants to marry Changmin, only his reasons aren't the ones Changmin would wish for. Junsu wants to be reliable member of his family, someone Junho's kids can look up to, he's afraid to be a burden and marrying Changmin will help to become someone like that.

Anyway I wonder if Junsu will confess ever what he dreamt of as child.
Their interaction and the conversations between them were so amazing. I like the baby steps they both take towards the other! Changmin is such an amazing person! It's nice Junsu started to recognize it too!

And JaeChun were priceless! Please say they will console each other for the loss! : D

Thank you for the wonderful update, I enjoyed every sentence of it!

[koreanbxblove]

WOW
WOW

he chooses Junsu!!!

I want the next chapter !!! * runs everywhere *

ça devient intéréssant !!!! aaaah j'en peux plus **

[chocolet89]

An update!!! Happpppy :) it's progressing quick now! Hopefully junsu will come to like the Prince soon and not have to lie anymore :3

[7ladies]

just liking the JYJ convo going on up there...
i think that changmin will use his own charm to make junsu love him, even if he finds out about junsu's real intention and desire, as mentioned by another user.

[ztarplay]

*Sighs

[dokssuri]

Thank you for your detailed comment! I don't mind at all <3

I love how you've analysed my characters. And I'm sorry... I also hate when people don't just communicate. I hate when that is used as a plot device, and yet I end up using it so often. But at least you know that my characters frustrate me too.. (yay?)

I'm stuck with these two dumdums though, and I'm trying to create a story in which they both grow and learn something, by making mistakes. Junsu is young and inexperienced and it would definitely be good for him to go out into the world and learn what he really wants do do with his life, but he doesn't get to do that (which is sad.. but on the other hand, if they were both at the end of their character development already, there would be no story). Changmin has to learn a thing or two about showing his emotions.

I hope you'll like where this is going.. and thank you again for your comment :)

[ztarplay]

Don't be apologetic about the devices YOU chose use my dear. The best thing about creative writing is that we can take what we generally dislike and see what we can do with it, no? Never apologize for that. It's part of the fun.

I'm YOUR reader, I'm gonna be frustrated no matter what you write because that's what conflict is supposed to do. I can analyze and hypothesize all I want. I will still be frustrated. Hehe.

Oh but I hear ya! Sometimes muses do whatever the hell they want. (>_<)

I'm definitely enjoying this my dear. ^^