Lifeline 2/5

[dokssuri]

Title: Lifeline
Pairing: Yoochun/Jaejoong
Summary: One fatal accident leads Jaejoong to his soulmate, the next leaves him forty days to say goodbye. Or, in which Jaejoong dies twice and Yoochun saves him the first time.

Comments

[n3uromanc3r]

I really like the story and the concept so far. First it reminded me of the drama '49 days', but later it turned out the only similarity between them is the chance they got to say goodbye.

It's so sad and frustrating how despite Jae's efforts things don't go the way he's planned them. Okay, it's hard to fix everything when you have only 40 days and the other party isn't too willing to cooperate - especially because he's completely unaware of the happenings...

I like Jaejoong's efforts to change things between them, but I think he shouldn't focus only to this but also to prepare Yoochun for life without him.

Actually I still have a faint hope he won't die yet, but I guess it's impossible.