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anyothergirl415 February 10 2011, 22:30:23 UTC
*flaily hands* you could NOT have chosen a better day to post this!!! THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH I LOVE IT SOOOOO MUCH!!!

Every little scene was full of so much schmoopy, wonderful goodness I can barely stand the way my heart's all swelling love. I could so spend like, an hour going over every line and telling you how MUCH I love them but you KNOW!

I've copied this story into word and I'm putting it on my Kindle so I can read it over and over in the hospital because this will definitely make me smile ALWAYS I know :D THANK YOU AGAIN!

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dodger_sister February 15 2011, 04:06:55 UTC
I AM SO HAPPY YOU LIKED IT AND GOT TO SEE IT BEFORE YOU LEFT!!! I was hoping you would catch it before you left for the hospital. I seriously wrote this right after we had that awesome comment night of discovering all the things we love in common. This was so much fun to write too!

Every little scene was full of so much schmoopy, wonderful goodness I can barely stand the way my heart's all swelling love.

Awwww, thank you. I really had fun finding their voices and everything and I have never written a marriage proposal before! And I know I promised you a ring...so I hope this is as good as a shiny diamond. ;)

Yay for downloading to your Kindle! I hear things went well at the hospital and hopefully you will be home soon and things will get better with your back. Love you, baby. /hugs/

PS: I totally forgot to put the '415' on your name in my post - but I fixed it!! Oops.

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dodger_sister February 15 2011, 04:07:50 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked them all, they were fun to write. :)

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ranua February 11 2011, 03:32:14 UTC
gloriously schmoopy and a bit silly, just perfect :)

The last line in each bit are great punch-lines, they're my favorite parts

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dodger_sister February 15 2011, 04:09:16 UTC
Thank you! The last lines were my favorite little bits. You always give me the best love! :)

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flawed_x_design August 11 2011, 01:57:42 UTC
LOL, this was such a fun read

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dodger_sister August 14 2011, 18:50:36 UTC
Thank you! It all started with that M2 bit and just sort of spiraled from there - glad you liked it, babe!

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comfy_slippers July 13 2012, 00:38:12 UTC
For someone who's never written Shawn/Gus before, I'd say you did a fantastic job for your first time! They're both in-character and it was a super fun read. :D The last line was hilarious too. XD

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dodger_sister July 16 2012, 01:56:24 UTC
Thank you! This was a lovely comment. I remember when I wrote it, I was a little worried that Shawn and Gus' voices are so distinct that I would never get them just right - so I am glad to hear that they felt in-character to you, and that you loved the last line as well. <3 :)

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