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dodger_sister December 2 2010, 05:20:40 UTC
Hi! and what with all the questions very much like Sam, too - I used to weekend nanny for this kid and trust me, by Monday morning I was so ready to never answer another question again! lol And it seemed like a very 'Sam' thing to do, so glad it worked for you. Thanks so much! :)

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ranua November 30 2010, 12:15:38 UTC
That sound you heard? That was me exploding from the cute.

That was fantastic. The character voices were great and the dialog spot on for little kids. If I tried to pick my favorite part we'd be here all day and the whole thing would be in italics down here.

You balanced the sweet with some bitter as well, really making it more true to life. I could just smish this whole thing up and keep it in my pocket.

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dodger_sister December 2 2010, 05:28:50 UTC
Dude. I didn't mean to make you explode. lol At last, all those years in child care have finally paid off - through fan-fic! ;)

If I tried to pick my favorite part we'd be here all day and the whole thing would be in italics down here.
- I'm all blushy now.

You balanced the sweet with some bitter as well, really making it more true to life.
- I was trying to not just make it all sweet sappy kid stuff, but I was worried some of the Dean & John moments changed the feel of the story too much - so it's good to hear that worked so well.

I could just smish this whole thing up and keep it in my pocket.
- heehee, only like the best comment ever! Thanks!! :)

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borgmama1of5 November 30 2010, 12:34:48 UTC
Sweet without being cloying--well done!

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dodger_sister December 2 2010, 05:32:38 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm relieved to know it didn't come out as overly sappy-sweet. Glad you enjoyed it! :)

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vikingprincess November 30 2010, 12:37:07 UTC
this is adorable!

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dodger_sister December 2 2010, 05:34:07 UTC
Hi! Thank you! :)

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geaven November 30 2010, 15:10:56 UTC
Being Swedish, I don't celebrate Thanksgiving, but I enjoy fics on the subject. And this was really sweet - Sammy being "thanks" for everything made my heart swell. <3<3<3

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dodger_sister December 2 2010, 05:38:49 UTC
Well, Thanksgiving has a universal theme that we can all be on-board with, no matter where we live - Pie. Wait...it's not about the pie? lol ;)

Sammy being "thanks" for everything made my heart swell

I am rather fond of that part too :) So happy you enjoyed this all. Thanks for the wonderful comment!

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randomstasis December 2 2010, 17:47:01 UTC
"...it's not about the pie? "
Blasphemy! Sacrilege! exorcizamus te!

Ok, maybe you're right. Really, it's all about turning happy turkey families into widows and orphans so we put little orphan turkeys in foster care to fatten up for next year!

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dodger_sister December 7 2010, 23:15:12 UTC
. Really, it's all about turning happy turkey families into widows and orphans so we put little orphan turkeys in foster care to fatten up for next year!

Hahaha - yes, that is the way of the turkey's life. And I would totally feel bad - if they weren't so damn delicious. ;)

It is totally about the pie - and about having pie for breakfast for like a week after Thanksgiving is over!

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