Into The Page.

[dodger_sister]

So, last year, wolfrider89 and I challenged each other to post a piece of our own original poetry in honor of National Poetry Month. I thought I'd do it again this year and I think she is going to as well! Since the month is almost over, I thought I'd better get on that

Comments

[shirebound]

That's absolutely beautiful.

[dodger_sister]

Thank you so much! Sometimes it's hard to be subjective about your own work, so I am thrilled for this piece to get such high praise.

[ceitfianna]

That's beautiful in meaning and formatting.

[dodger_sister]

Thank you! I was even a little surprised that I tried this style of formatting at such a young age, so your compliment makes me truly happy.

[vikingprincess]

Love it!

[dodger_sister]

Thanks, babe! That awesome poem you posted earlier in the monthabout writing made me think of this and wonder if I still had it somewhere.

[vikingprincess]

They do share a sentiment, don't they? :) I'm glad you found it.

[wolfrider89]

Oh wow. Oh wow, baby. I LOVED this. The format, the meaning, the words, the soaring, the pacing. Beautiful. I especially loved the sinking, falling, spreading part. :)

[dodger_sister]

Thank you, bb!! I look at the formatting and the pacing and I wonder how I could have done something so unique at the age of 13, when about 5 years later all my poetry just involved extreme cussing. lol I am so glad you liked it so much! This comment has made me beam like crazy. <3.

[ranua]

very lovely dear :) the sentiment is exactly perfect and the format fits that very well.

[dodger_sister]

Thank you! I thought maybe the writers on my FList would understand this piece. :) <3