Happiness (3/13)

[doctorpancakes]

Happiness (3/13)
by me, doctorpancakes
Fandom: Nathan Barley
Pairing: Dan/Jonatton
Rating: R, this chapter
Word Count: 1022, this chapter (3789, so far)
Warnings: references to cars; sexytiems
Disclaimer: Brooker and Morris own Nathan Barley, not me. I own a pot of homemade dulce de leche simmering on the stove, but not these characters, sadly.

Comments

[jackiethomas73]

I'm really enjoying this story. I especially like what you've done with Jonatton's character. He's still himself but I like him.

[doctorpancakes]

He's still himself but I like him.

This is the highest praise I think I've ever been given. You're too kind, my friend. *blushes like 596898579587.2 pomegranate seeds*

[jakobf]

OMG, I love this so much! I never thought I could like this pairing, but you definitely made me love it. They´re the perfect match the way you write them (and I´ll never be able to watch Nathan Barley without going "Awww...")

You captured them perfectly, even though you altered the way they act. Brilliant job. Wow!

[doctorpancakes]

I totally awww at Nathan Barley, heehee. ;)

Also, if I can don my Pretentious Author Cap for a moment, yes. One of the things I really try to be aware of when I write is allowing the characters to experience personal growth while still remaining, at their core, themselves. It gets a little bothersome to me when characters remain static in spite of whatever new circumstances might be thrown at them.

[doctorpancakes]

Yeah, Top Gear has that effect on me too. Hence, uhh, Jonatton's new car.

[jolieperruche]

aaaaaaaaaaaaaargh want more! I can tell this is going to be a very disconcerting meeting for Mr. Ashcroft, and I must know more! <3333333333333333333333

[doctorpancakes]

Soon, my dear ;) Thank you muchly!

[concupiscence66]

Lo-fucking-L!

“Mum, meet Dan Ashcroft. We’re in love.”

Did not see it coming! Brava!

[doctorpancakes]

Hit you right in the nose like a gently surprising boop! OHYEAH