Harry Potter Fic: Sleeping with the Enemy (2/2)

[doctor_java]

Title: Sleeping with the Enemy (2.2)
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Hermione/Millicent
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 11.130
Summary: Hermione and Millicent have an unspoken - and secret - arrangement. When Ron and Harry find out about it, and Millicent tries to change the terms, Hermione gets a bit overwhelmed.
Disclaimer: Harry Potter does not belong to me,

Comments

[zofbadfaith]

I don't believe I know all the words in English to explain flatly to you how much I've enjoyed your story. As much of a Hermione worshipper that I am, I'm not that taken with Millicent, but, you see, your Millicent is hot in so many ways.
And there's so many more things that I love; how Ron is more annoying and childish than hateful and how Hermione seems to be oblivious about some things, and how Millicent managed to, in a way, outsmart her.

Thanks for sharing! :D

[doctor_java]

Thank you so much, you are too kind! I'm glad you liked the story, and I have to say, I wasn't much taken with Millicent either, until I started writing this. I'm also relieved you found Ron childish as opposed to mean-spirited. I was worried about him crossing that line in this, and there was a lot of re-writing of that bit in the bar to keep things (what I hoped were mostly) lighthearted.

Thanks again for your kind words!