Title: Beauty Rests
Author: Cat Wojohowicz
Characters/Pairings: Nine/Rose
Rating: R
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lycanprincess Summary: A seqal to
In the Eye of the Beholder. Rose and the Doctor are both sick of where their relationship is at. Who will break first?
A/N: This is my first try at smut. Please be nice. Comments are love.
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Although, if you don't mind -it also was maybe a bit too "fast". Can't really explain it, but it seemed a bit like you being unsure, as it is your first smut fic, made you trying to get over with the "task" soon.
Nothing that would make the story bad, as I said, I really liked it, it is very well written, and fast is probably not so wrong for Nine ;) It's just what at some point also came to my mind.
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That really had nothing to do with it being my first one, and everything to do with the fact that I wanted to get to bed and wouldn't be able to get back to it until much later the next day.
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