Comments | doctoggy: Secrets and Consequences (14/?)

doctoggy

Secrets and Consequences (14/?)

Jul 11, 2011 23:38

See you soon.

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caryl_star88 July 12 2011, 23:26:51 UTC

ok. i love it alredy! i cant wait for it to be completed! :DDDDD waaa~ i was so happy when i saw this and i am patiently waiting for the complete chapter! i so love this :DD and yoo of course :)

much love!

thanks for sharing!!

kyaaaaaa~

caryl_star88 July 12 2011, 23:28:31 UTC

oh, i'm first? :) yatta! :DDDDDDD

doctoggy July 13 2011, 23:24:53 UTC

youa re first!!

sorry that it is not done yet.

life, and nino, are being diffcult. ^^*

doctoggy July 17 2011, 02:03:53 UTC

It is done! Enjoy :)

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arisa_draconis July 13 2011, 11:14:51 UTC

Ooooh~ Frankly, I don't really care if there will be smut or not as long as you finish the story! I love it and well... good luck with finishing~

Will look out for next update~

doctoggy July 17 2011, 02:03:23 UTC

And we are updated! Sorry for the delay.

I will finish the story. Worry not.
And the smut will sort of me a side- non cannon per se, sort of things. I just want to try my hand at it! ^^*

Thanks for reading!

arisa_draconis July 17 2011, 09:00:08 UTC

Kyaaa~ Kazuuuuu, I hope everything would be fine~ Thanks for adding me back btw :)

I'm looking forward to the next update~

doctoggy July 17 2011, 15:54:51 UTC

Sorry for the delay in adding you back. I meant too, and then went sans reliable internet for like a week. But things are better now :)

murrponchan July 17 2011, 03:17:57 UTC

I just thought you'd like to know that you posted the first part of the chapter twice!

But other than that, I like this story and have been following from the beginning. Sorry that it's taken me so long as to wait until the 14th chapter to say something.

doctoggy July 17 2011, 15:55:18 UTC

Thanks! Fixed it.

Thank you so much for reading. :)

deelovesryo July 17 2011, 04:05:38 UTC

Scheming Aiba is so cute and so much fun! and I like how all of them really know one another, that Sho notices the plan and it's right there to comfort insecure Aiba at the end was a very nice way of portraying it in this chapter. The mails are pretty fun too.
Thanks for sharing!

doctoggy July 17 2011, 15:57:38 UTC

I cannot see Aiba just being OK with it in the end, since it was not something that Nino wanted to o himself. Needed to happen, sure, but I can see him worrying as he did, but Sho and Ohno will cheer Aiba up. :) Well, at least once Ohno is made aware of the plan. ^^* :)

cherry1989 July 17 2011, 11:32:07 UTC

Lol Aiba and Jun! XD Kidnapping Nino is hilarious thought! XD XD XD Oh I so love this series, thanks for writing this <3

doctoggy July 17 2011, 15:56:03 UTC

I was not sure how the kidnapping was going to go, so I am glad that it ended up fun. :)