Together Forever - or something like that (Kisumai, Fujikita)

[doctoggy]

So, this got written for shiritori at writetomyheart as an idea that has been bothering me. Which is great. But I should have been working on my Matsumiya for the bigbang_je. Which is a work in progress. I just cant make the story work and its pissing me off

Comments

[agogo_kun]

Why Mitsu whyyy??!

Oh so full of angst, I love angst (am I an M? xD) and I like how you write it here, good job!

A sequel maybe? hehe

Thanks for writing a HiroSuke fic :))

[doctoggy]

thank you!!
there will be one for sure!

[agogo_kun]

Yaaaay! I'll be waiting for it! xD

[racanai]

Oh dear, Mitsu you're an idiot! Now follow Gaya to Russia and settle things! >_<

I like angst and I enjoyed reading this! ^^

[doctoggy]

not russia! but i am working on the follow up!!

[rim1789]

XDDD Wait you told me you never write angst without a fluff ending XDD

Owww I feel so bad for Taipi T_____T Mitsu, even if you actually didn't believe it happened T___T you should have cheeeecked ;---;

Thank you for this ^O^

[doctoggy]

It's not done yet. There is a sequel

[keith14]

Mitsu what are you doing??? I feel bad for Taipi :( He will go to Russia sad :( Thank you so much for writing this fic. ^_^ Can't wait to read the sequel :)

[taipi_chan]

I'm sitting here and I'm seriously crying!
Poor Tai-chan...
And Kitayama is a dick indeed! How can he do something like that to poor Tai-chan?
But seriously, never confess when the other person is drunk, I had my own problems because od that. Never again!

Well... If you want to listen to critique read on, if not ignore the next sentences.
All in all the story is written really nice. There are just a few grammar error here and there. Nothing big, just interrupting the reading flow. Not that I'm better, I most probably make more mistakes than anybody else, but it is always easier for strangers to find mistakes than for oneself.
Otherwise a great story and I'll continue reading right now~