The Way You Move (OhnoxSho):

[doctoggy]

Written as part of an exchange with boblemon and also happening to fufill a prompt for rainbowfilling since i totaly cheat like that. :)

Title: The way you move
Pairing: ShoxOhno
Request: A yama request: Ohno is getting old, and this bothers him, but Sho offers comfort in the only way that Sho can.
Prompt: Rainbow filling prompt: senpai admiration

Comments

[boblemon]

:DD It's good so far! Sho and Juntoshi is cute~ I'm looking forward to see how it'll end! (By the way, I think contrast is fine for that note at the beginning.)

I've started on yours too! Although I'm not sure when I'll finish. >__>

[doctoggy]

Yay for so far so good. Had to add a juntoshi moment in there, just because yes, and they in my brain, are at least BFFy, since Jun adored Ohno so.

Take your time. I am doing obscene amounts of writing at the moment. I will be taking a break soon. ^^*

[boblemon]

Aw, I really love how that turned out, with Sho's sort of rushing all over the place thinking, and especially at the end when Ohno started cutting off his train of thought, lol. By the way, I really liked this part: ...though that was something that would need to be talked about when there was less kissing going on. XD They're so cute and cuddly together~ Awww! Plus Jun's micromanaging and a little nudge nudge Matsumiya there on the side. You couldn't help it, could you? ^__^ And the fact that Sho was overthinking things, that Ohno knew he was doing so, and that Sho still couldn't do anything about it in the end. Sort of cute failure in a roundabout way. Thank you so much for writing this for me. :3

[doctoggy]

oh good, i want sure if you would like it, as it wasnt totally what was requested. but this is what happened when i sat down to write. so i can write you something else if you think its necessary.

sho was a little but fail in this, but in a adorable kind of way. which was fun to write. he was trying, he really was :)

yama was hard to write. which is odd, since in many ways they make sense, it was just hard to write. sho wasnt cooperating (i always have issues with him though). but I am glad that you liked it. and i couldnt resist a bit of matsumiya. just a bit. :)

[nekochan_lia]

yaaay you wrote yama <3
i love it how sho didn't realize his own feelings until satoshi kissed him
and satoshi was being calm and amazing as always
jun playing the matchmaker role for ohno and sho was perfect XD

[doctoggy]

I did write yama! rare for me.

jun as matchmaker was a lot of fun.

thanks for reading!

[mugen_ai3]

Yay, Yama and MatsuMiya...how cute. Nice ending. The Juntoshi and Sakumoto friendships were great as well.

[doctoggy]

Thanks for reading!!

[xteencrazii143]

my otps in one fic <3 yama and matsumiya! they stole my heart XD

[doctoggy]

thanks for reading! glad you liked it!!

[kk4food]

Ohno is right, Sho thinks too much, and he is running out of patience. Sometimes a little action is far more expressive than words and with a little help from the tequila too LOL
Happy to see that their mutual feelings are finally revealed to each other XD
Thanks for sharing :)

[doctoggy]

thanks for reading!!