Hawaii Five-0 Fic - 'The Weight of Us'

Apr 29, 2011 20:54

Author/Artist: doc_3 
Title: The Weight of Us
Rating: R, mainly for language, M/M kissing
Warnings/Spoilers:  Spoilers - general for any aired episodes, although slight.
Summary:   Danny looks back at a decision he and Steve made years ago, and has an important conversation with a teenaged Grace.  Future fic. Danny/Steve
Author's note:  This was a ( Read more... )

fan fiction, steve/danny, hawaii 5-0

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huntress69 April 30 2011, 01:43:35 UTC
This was lovely, simply beautiful, and they get the happy ending (or would that be beginning) they deserve. Thanks for writing it.

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doc_3 April 30 2011, 01:46:37 UTC
Thank so much, the idea of a happy beginning was exactly what I was going for here.

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doc_3 April 30 2011, 02:00:06 UTC
Oh yeah, in my head future Steve is just as hot, a little grayer, and mellowed a little around the edges. And there is nothing I love more than some Steve/Grace time. In my head-canon, Danny is so outnumbered by those two!

Thanks for your kind words, I was trying so hard for sweet without going overboard.

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somehowunbroken April 30 2011, 02:14:35 UTC
For a minute there, I was so sure they ere just gonna stay sad and pining, but then then then you fixed it :)
Danny hated that Steve still looked so fucking grateful, like Danny was a gift he could never say thanks for enough times. If it took the rest of his life, Danny vowed to make Steve believe he deserved to be loved this much.
This hurts in the best way. Lovely.

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doc_3 April 30 2011, 02:20:54 UTC
Thanks :)

Yeah, I was on a little angst trip when I first came up with the idea, but I couldn't leave the boys like that. And Steve hurts my heart a little bit always.

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Re: SORRY I'M A RAMBLING MESS OVER THIS, BABE. doc_3 April 30 2011, 02:34:00 UTC
YOU ... I can't even ...

So there are tears now. Like in my eyes. First you hold my hand through this whole process and then kick my ass to get me to post it and now this? Review of pure love.

As a fellow shallow fangirl and AOL devotee, I want to know for realsies if he has black boxer briefs and if not I'm sending him some. Just saying. And the hair? I'm obsessed with the gray hair.

Deep breath... I'm glad I'm writing at all, but this fandom is fabulous. AS ARE YOU.

ILU, bb!

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Re: SORRY I'M A RAMBLING MESS OVER THIS, BABE. doc_3 April 30 2011, 02:48:26 UTC
Now that you mention it, it does seem like there's plenty of circulating air down there. (Which doesn't seem like it would be too comfy in those cargo pants but I'm not complaining.) And I'm prepared to be wowed by the skinny jeans.

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indigocat April 30 2011, 02:26:51 UTC
Happy ending for the story. Loved it.

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doc_3 April 30 2011, 02:50:26 UTC
Thanks :) I started out with an angsty vibe, but needed the happy at the end before I could let it go.

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