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ama_blue May 21 2010, 05:39:54 UTC
Guh. I feel like so many of the post-ep fics for this are going to leave me feeling gutted.

But letting her hand, the fine bones belying the steel of her grip, slip from his, physically forcing himself to let go of the woman he loves, is the single most difficult act of his life.

This was beautiful and so true, I think. Great ficlet.

Oh, and on a superficial note, I so agree with you that DB's hair at the end made him look that much more attractive. I wish he always wore his hair in a sidepart.

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doc_3 May 21 2010, 13:04:19 UTC
Like I said, this ficlet was a first for me. (I'm way too wordy in general for them).

And if he comes back next year and keeps the part? I'm a goner :)

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tempertemper May 21 2010, 10:30:04 UTC
OMG this is beautiful, Doc!

*weeps*

I officially love this episode even more if it inspires you to fic, btw ;)

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doc_3 May 21 2010, 13:09:13 UTC
IKR? This must have been an epic episode if I wrote a ficlet right afterwards.

I'm glad you liked!

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ayiana May 21 2010, 12:12:44 UTC
Wimper.

This? Is perfect.

But it isn't really making me feel better, you know. :P

But letting her hand, the fine bones belying the steel of her grip, slip from his, physically forcing himself to let go of the woman he loves, is the single most difficult act of his life.

I agree with ama_blue. Perfect, if heartbreaking, line.

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doc_3 May 21 2010, 13:12:14 UTC
Awww, thanks hon.

I watched that had holding scene several times (who hasn't?) and I thought it looked like he almost pushed her hand out of his like he had to force himself to do it. And he definitely made himself walk away.

PS - Haven't forgotten about checking gmail this time! You will hear from me there later today :)

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doc_3 May 21 2010, 16:07:28 UTC
Thanks. Very off the cuff but sometimes those work out okay.

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ggjunkie33 May 22 2010, 01:59:41 UTC
Angst angst angst! Yet I love it :)

Beautifully written, bb. ♥

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doc_3 May 22 2010, 02:12:54 UTC
Thanks. Yeah, I think angst is going to be the order of the day for the next few months. But hopeful angst if that makes sense? Bring on the fics!

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