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Fan Fiction: Undissolved Completely

Dec 22, 2009 12:25

Title:Undissolved Completely Genre:Romance, comedy, supernatural Rating:PG-13 Character Pairings:DaisukexRiku, SatoshixRisa Warnings:Continuation from anime with minor changes from the manga. Disclaimers:I do not own DNAngel nor any of its characters or components.All belongs to Sugisaki Yukiru. Summary:This is basically a continuation of the anime ( Read more... )

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leonawriter December 22 2009, 20:07:14 UTC

Hm - not bad, once I read through it. I have a couple of points, though. First, it's always best to post large things like this behind an lj cut. That way it doesn't seem so bulky. Second is that you've got to put it into paragraphs, and speech on different lines. That makes it ten times easier to read, and it'll look longer, too. Which can be a good thing. It's sometimes tiresome to see a long page of writing, and it's nicer to see it all broken up.