Fic - Oranges, Ties, and Moldy Boxes

[dn_soir]

Title: Chapter 1 - Oranges, Ties, and Moldy Boxes
Author: Soir

Pairing: Akame, mmmmm…A.K.A.>>> Kamenishi (And perhaps some NishiNashi! OMG, HAHAHHAAAA!!!!!! *speechless*> Ryo X Kazuya?!??!!!!!! NishiYa?)
Rating:………………………………….TBO
Disclaimer: Oddly enough, the idea of owning them is kind of a turnoff…Sure, I’d like to meet them…Buuut….*is afraid her

Comments

[kirei_kisetsu]

Kimi wa Petto Akame-style, interesting~

[dn_soir]

Thank you!!! I'm so happy you find it entertaining!
I will definitely make it worthwhile!! *flutters*

[paddyabroad]

*whistles*
Did you say something? XDDDD

I liked the fic a lot!!!!!!!!!! Although JinJin hardly appeared...looking forward to more!

[dn_soir]

*grins like crazy* Jin will appear, and, oh mi gah, you
will like him, Ihopepraytogod!!! ^^;;;

[paddyabroad]

LOL *pats head* don't worry, I like every Jin XD

[naruchu]

Hmm.. I was wondering for a while why the phrase on your lj cut sounded so familiar. It's a Beck/Beat Crusaders song! I like that song =) yeah.

I started watching Kimi wa Petto, but couldn't sit through it - your version should be so much better with Kame~~ I hope Yamapi gets to play a bigger part, but uh, if Ryo takes Hasumi's role (somehow), it wouldn't matter much if he doesn't =X

Very well, in fact; the apartment he lived in was spacious (mainly because of the fact that he hardly had anything in it), and elegant.
You might want to delete the stuff in brackets, since you also mention it in the next paragraph, and it fits better there.

and Tomohisa’s breath was breathing down his Kazuya’s neck...
erase 'Kazuya's'? And I believe the saying is justing '(Tomohisa was) breathing down (his) neck'

I hope you update sooon.

[dn_soir]

Yeay, you noticed the LJ cut!!! ^^

And thank you so much for editing for me!! I very
much appreciate all the beta-ing I can get, so please
point out any and all mistakes!! *hugs*
I corrected them, by the way. I didn't even notice
before! Thank you, thank you! The sentences make so
much more sense now, oddly enough...*laughs*

[dn_soir]

P.S., OMG, YOUR ICON IS SO CUTE!