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Week #80 - Death Eraser

Oct 09, 2009 20:52

Title: Musings
Author: MikoPony
Pairing/Characters: Mikami
Rating/Warnings: G
Summary: Mikami has the Death Eraser. His thoughts. Drabble.
Length: 100
Author's Notes: So I just made a promise to myself that I would post for every subject. This really isn't great, but I had a hard time trying to think of something for this week. May extend it at a ( Read more... )

mikopony, week #80 - death eraser

Comments 7

razzberridust October 10 2009, 02:05:40 UTC

I. LOVE. THIS.

The idea of Mikami having such a chastizing object is really powerful. It's genius. <3

mikopony October 10 2009, 02:22:06 UTC

I'm so glad you like it. (:
My original idea had to do with Ryuk and Raito and L, but I'm tired of always writing about them.
This is my first attempt at writing anything to do with Mikami.

sabriel75 October 10 2009, 17:36:55 UTC

I shall never tire of reading about L and Light... just because something's popular does not negate the thrall of the pairing.

Do hope you don't stop completely. That would be sad. You've some interesting thoughts here and they could be just as useful reinterpreting Light and L... nothing's original, only the voice that supplies it life is.

versipellis October 10 2009, 10:02:19 UTC

Oooh, that was really good - you got such a lot across in so few words!

sabriel75 October 10 2009, 17:34:18 UTC

Excellent work!

Mikami doubting God... never! But then again, if he were in possession of such eraser, there would have to be thoughts of what if... and I like that you didn't take it there. Instead you focused on how Mikami would deal... he would repeat over and over the attributes of what makes God, God.

Superbly characterized.

saphariel October 12 2009, 02:20:18 UTC

I applaud the idea of posting for every subject. Good luck! If you extended it, it would be great to see Mikami warring with the idea that his perfect God could be wrong since the eraser exists. I'll reiterate: great characterization in so few words.

speaky_bean October 13 2009, 15:07:02 UTC

Oh, lovely work! That was such a creepy little story. I can very much see Mikami feeling this way--the existence of a death eraser doesn't really fit into his highly structured little world. I'd love to see an extension of this.

Also, it makes me very happy that you want to keep posting for every prompt! :D I love it when people stick around! ♥