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Week #1 - Ms. Mikami

Mar 29, 2008 21:40

Title: Sketches
Rating: Not higher than PG?
Characters: Teru Mikami and Kiyomi Takada. And Teru's mom. In a sense. WHY, YES, I'M PREDICTABLE. >o<
Warnings: None, really.
Word Count: 325

( Sketches )

viola_canina, week #1 - ms. mikami

Comments 19

dayari March 30 2008, 08:09:43 UTC

This was great!! =) I love how everything Kiyomi said wasn't really understood by Teru the way she wanted it to. Not really getting the point of someone trying to flirt with him (sort of) fits his character very well! ^^

And I love how he changed the subject as soon as his mother came up. That says something XD

viola_canina March 30 2008, 08:29:18 UTC

Well, Teru's relationship with his mom was awfully complex... so I'd expect him to change the subject. And while he's supposed to be pretty clever, I don't think he's that smart when it comes to flirting. xDDD;;; Thank you!

brightredosca March 31 2008, 14:07:30 UTC

You always write very good MikamixTakada. ^_^

viola_canina April 3 2008, 09:32:05 UTC

Thank you! *_* Wow, people actually know me for... this sort of stuff. *O.O*

ich_bin_puppy April 4 2008, 01:44:11 UTC

You've somehow managed to write these characters perfectly.

viola_canina April 4 2008, 15:24:03 UTC

Thank you so much! This means a lot to me since I adore them.

ich_bin_puppy April 5 2008, 23:30:20 UTC

You're welcome :). Perhaps since you like them so much it's easier to undertand them? Or vice-versa?