BLAH!!!

[dmr2158]

I am working on a sequel to "Promise of Touch", and I feel like I am being repetative in my "smut" descriptions.  I can feel what I want to say and how the characters feel, but getting that across is not happening.  I do not want to write smut just for smuts sake, but have it be part of the plot.

I mean seriously, I just used the words "twin

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[ex_nadeshiko480]

Sorry that you're having trouble, sweets.

As a reader of your fics, I gotta say that your love scenes are quite different from each other. *blushes* Defitely not the same old stuff over and over again.

Hope that things get better for you and I can't wait to read the sequal!

[dmr2158]

Well the sequel is done. It doesn't have quite as much graphic smut as some of my other pieces, but I like it okay.

Thanks for the encouragement.

[thecricket]

I snagged a few links from my favorite list of fanfic writing resources that might help. Two good essays about writing hot yet believable sex: How to Write a Sex Scene and
The Formula for Writing Sex Scenes.
And if you want to find an alternative to "twin treasures" the Dictionary of Sexual Terms might help

[dmr2158]

Thanks for the links. I read the ideas and it helped me to refocus my thoughts.