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Do you See Me? Do you Know Me? [PG-13] for hinkykneazel

May 20, 2011 21:31

This story was generously written by a Pinch Hitter in a much shortened writing time. Their name will be revealed when we post our final Master List.

Title: Do You See Me? Do You Know Me? Do You Want Me? Do You Love Me?
Author: Margaritama
Rating: PG-13
Recipient: hinkykneazel
Disclaimer: In its use of intellectual property and characters ( Read more... )

Comments 24

drcjsnider May 21 2011, 02:04:40 UTC

AH!!! Great stuff. I knew that the prsents had to be from Draco, but I thought it was all part of the initially wooing. I loved finding out that they were in the midst of a long relationship. Loved the back and forth dialogue at the party too!

margaritaabate May 22 2011, 20:24:59 UTC

Thank you so much. The intent was to keep everyone off balance and then the big reveal at the end. :-)

dormiensa May 21 2011, 02:15:33 UTC

what a beautiful, sensual, romantic fic! i spy a lot of very green complexions in the vicinity! oh my, when malfoys set out to woo, they really pull all the punches! i LOVE that draco is so sensitive, so observant. lucky, lucky witch!

margaritaabate May 22 2011, 20:25:26 UTC

Hugs to you. You saw right through me didn't you! LOL

So glad you enjoyed.

rzzmg May 21 2011, 02:17:15 UTC

OH MY GOD, I LOVED THIS STORY!

You've conveyed, in one short ficlet, the essence of the perfect Dramione romance - from the small details (the ribbon, the tea set, the chocolates, the flowers, the ring) to the larger picture (the strength of their feelings for each other). Well-developed D & H here and in-character, no SPaG issues as far as I could see, and a plot that left my heart beating rapidly and me sighing in happiness.

*CLAPS ENTHUSIASTICALLY*

Good job, author! FIVE STARS! Going to my favs, most definitely!

margaritaabate May 22 2011, 20:27:23 UTC

*blushing bright pink* Thank you so much rzzmg....I can't thank you enough for the amazing review. That its going into your favs is such a complement from someone I admire. Thank you again for reading and for commenting so generously on all my stories.

Hugs to you.

rzzmg May 22 2011, 20:32:21 UTC

WOW! I was amazed to read the reveals and realize this was from you. Should have expected it, as you're already on my favs. ;)

NICE JOB, DAHLING!!!

artsyjeans May 21 2011, 02:24:18 UTC

Love the back and forth. Learning what his notes said was so sweet as this whole piece was. Adorable. Lovely.

margaritaabate May 22 2011, 20:28:03 UTC

thank you for reading.....and so glad you liked this.

mccargi May 21 2011, 03:58:42 UTC

I love the persisting bit of mystery, all of the details given about each gift as it is received, as well as those withheld until the end. The way the chocolates are tied to such a sweet memory of her parents was a very nice touch. I absolutely adore the twist at the end, that they are together and this was a test to see how well he pays attention and knows her, not just an elaborate attempt to garner her attention. A very sweet and romantic story. Well done!

margaritaabate May 22 2011, 20:28:35 UTC

it was a bit of a mystery so I'm thrilled you saw that....thank you for reading.