What Comes down [PG-13] for withdrawnred (3/3)

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Title: What Comes Down
Author: paranthelion
Rating: PG-13
Recipient: withdrawnred
Disclaimer: The characters and situations portrayed in this story do not belong to me. No money is being made and no copyright/trademark infringement is intended.
Warning: swearing, minor sexual situations
Author Notes: Post-Hogwarts. Epilogue cheerfully thrown out the window.

Comments

[dormiensa]

a fascinating look into draco's psyche! the lengths he goes to for family really is astonishing. and you wrote it so well that i don't even feel much sympathy for hermione for being used in such a way without her knowing what kind of evil bastard he still is! :P

[jenjou]

hahaha. he kind of is an evil bastard. but hey, it's all in the name of love :) thanks for commenting!

[waterytart_11]

loved it!

[jenjou]

thanks!

[cklls]

Well-constructed, cogent and intelligent. I really enjoyed their banter and bickering. It all sounded so entirely true to character. I'm sleepy as all get-out, but I couldn't stop reading this. Time for bed, now! Thanks for a very entertaining read. Very, very well done!

[jenjou]

thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

[skinnieminnie27]

Wow this was great! Draco is so manipulative! it's awesome. His whole thought process and beliefs were so true to character, he was kind of a jerk yet I still sympathized with him. The way you wrote Pansy was also good, so many times in fanfiction she's written as this evil bitch but in this story we kinda get a feel for the reason she acts that way. Anyways great job!

[jenjou]

haha, I'm glad you enjoyed the manipulation! and that you liked Pansy! It always puts me off when she's written as the screechy psycho-bitch from hell, so it was fun to write a slightly more sympathetic view. Thanks for commenting!

[eilonwy1]

First off, how could I not love a story that's prefaced with "epilogue thrown cheerfully out the window"!

Must agree with all preceding comments. And I'll add how very much I enjoyed the dialogue, all of it. Clever, sharp, funny, and very much in character.

Wonderful ending too, that last bit between Draco and Hermione. It was so clearly written, I could actually see and hear it in my head, like the final, very satisfying frames of a really good movie!

Thanks, Mystery Writer, for a most enjoyable read!

[jenjou]

I'm so glad you liked the ending! I struggle a lot with romancy type scenes (I'm definitely no romantic at heart!), so it's a relief to hear it came out okay. Thanks for the comment!