FC1 - "Caring is Creepy", basicaquatics/attica (2/2)

[otter_ferret]

Title: Caring is Creepy
Name: attica
LJ: basicaquatics
Rating: PG-13 for crude lang.
Warnings: Unrealistic references to hip-hop music, unrealistic depth, vodka-use, and b-lang for fourteen-fifteen year-olds. Draco’s a kid. Hermione’s a kid. 4th year. Sorry, but no sex, seeing as how that would be kind of gross and illegal and because - Homie

Comments

[mina21]

this was brilliant! i love your work and i'm ecstatic that you created this. this felt so believable. Great job!

[ohmemory]

This story needs more reviews, jebus because it's great!
I love how you made them believable 14 year-olds. And they're just so adorable in this piece but you can still see the bigger picture. I don't really know what I mean by 'bigger picture' but there's a feeling where there's just so much more to this fic. Eh.

Anyway! Great job. :D

[misconstrue]

haha nice, nice (direct reference to the end). I'm fairly fond of it. Not sure how I feel about the direct reflection of the lines at the end, but it was pretty sweet in general.

[yfrontz]

That was gorgeous. Very well done.

[sellthelie]

Wonderful! I loved it, brilliant job. :)