Comments | dmarley: FIC: "Displacement" (Stargate Atlantis McKay/Sheppard Sheppard/Zelenka NC-17 Slash)

dmarley

FIC: "Displacement" (Stargate Atlantis McKay/Sheppard Sheppard/Zelenka NC-17 Slash)

Mar 05, 2008 20:34

Title: Displacement
Author: Dorothy Marley (dmarley)
Email address: dorothy.marley at gmail dot com
Rating: Explicit sexual content
Fandom: Stargate: Atlantis
Pairing: Rodney McKay/John Sheppard, Radek Zelenka/John Sheppard, Radek Zelenka/(It would be a spoiler)
Words: ~5,000
Date: March 3, 2008
Archive: Yes to Area 52 and Wraithbait. All others please ( Read more... )

john sheppard, slash, radek zelenka, mckay/sheppard, ronon dex, stargate atlantis, fanfiction, rodney mckay, sheppard/zelenka

Comments 26

tingler March 6 2008, 07:19:21 UTC

SQUEEEEE!

I mean, er, my goodness, and you a mother, too, to be writing such smut.

(Really good smut, too.)

So was John just making up the Radek encounter? If not, yet again, he didn't see it coming. Heh!

dmarley March 6 2008, 11:43:32 UTC

Boo's going to learn to read soon. This is going to mean some significant zine-hiding. :)

Poor John. He really does never notice these things. And yeah, when I wrote it I wrote from the premise that John and Radek did have sex, but now that you've said that I'm also open to the interpretation that John was, in fact, making it up. Because that would be pretty darn funny, too. :)

I'm glad you liked it. I've actually had this story finished since before Christmas, and I finally just said, "Okay, enough already, if it flies, it flies and if it flops, it flops. Post away!" So, thanks for the squee! :)

coreopsis March 15 2008, 22:06:10 UTC

Ahahahaha Oh, boys. Of course, they would get into an investigation like this. I love that Teyla was the best at interviewing people and of course I aodred the end scene with Ronon. hee.

That was great fun. Now you should write some more SGA fic. *g*

dmarley March 17 2008, 19:11:32 UTC

Thank you! This is one of those stories where I thought "Well, either they'll think I'm funny or they'll back away slowly. Not much middle ground here." And I think there needs to be more Ronon/Radek. Just saying. :)

I've got a couple of other SGA stories percolating, but my problem is that I started about fifty stories and never followed through on any of them except this one. Seriously, I've been writing practically non-stop in the fandom for nearly a year, and this is all I've finished. Well, except the NaNoWriMo story, and it doesn't count because I got to 50,000 words and then slapped on an epilogue without resolving the plot.

*Then* that accursed second season of Torchwood came along and was all fun and awesome, so now I'm thinking about how I could write an Atlantis/Torchwood crossover.

I love hate love fandom....;)

coreopsis March 17 2008, 19:20:06 UTC

now I'm thinking about how I could write an Atlantis/Torchwood crossover.
eeee! YES, PLEASE. You should write that because it would be awesome.

And oh yeah, I hear you on starting stories that never go anywhere. That's my life. *g*

There needs to be lots and lots of Ronon/Radek-- or Radek/anyone-who-isn't-John-and/or-Rodney and Ronon/anyone-who-isn't-John-and/or-Rodney (sorry must cling desperately to my OTP.) *g*

advection March 17 2008, 21:00:34 UTC

I totally loved this. :-)

dmarley March 18 2008, 01:04:36 UTC

Thank you! Believe me, it was fun to write, too. :)

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dmarley March 18 2008, 01:05:47 UTC

My death-by-watermelon-flavored-sugarless will be on your head.

At least you'll die laughing? ;)

I'm glad you liked that! It was one of my favorites. :)

wanted_a_pony March 18 2008, 03:36:59 UTC

Aaaahhh, so funny & hot & fantastic! Yeah, babe, it definitely flies--lighter than air, faster than 200 mph. ;-)

Say, I got the impression that Teyla made up that impressive list of Radek's lovers, either to pull a practical joke on them or as a sneaky ploy to throw John & Rodney together. Am I wrong? The only persons Radek definitely boffed were John & Ronon.... Of course I'm perfectly willing to believe her list was gospel truth 'cause Radek is sneaky and hot.

Best line (actually, 2 sentences) ever about the scientific method in The Boyz' hands:
By the fifth night, it was pretty clear to John that they weren't even pretending to stick to the parameters of the experiment anymore. Well, unless the experiment was "if John Sheppard is sucking Rodney McKay's dick, how many fingers can John put in Rodney's ass before Rodney loses the power of coherent speech?"Oh yeah, science classes across the nation would get a lot more respect & enrollment if the labs were more like that ( ... )

dmarley March 19 2008, 16:48:57 UTC

Thank you ( ... )