Writing Prompts

[dldzioba]

I'm trying to do atleast one prompt every day on the computer. A warm up of sorts for nano, I'm also doing prompts in a notebook with my lovely characters and setting for this year.

Comments

[kikiandkika]

Very well written, especially the first one. the second one reminds me of my relationship with my boyfriend, so i can relate.

[dldzioba]

*blushes*
Thanks...

Mind if I friend you?

[kikiandkika]

No problem, go right ahead

[phatbwaijohn]

Underwater - DISTURBING. HIGHLY disturbing. I'll never look at olympic swimmers the same...

Voice - A little less disturbing...but I can hear bunnies boiling...

[dldzioba]

Bunnies boiling???!!!

[piratealaria]

The first one reminds me of something you may see in a dream. I like it, it has a concrete detail to it that I could never get if I tried XD

The second one, I liked it too, but not as much as the first one. The voice was cool, and very well described.

And if this is too much detail to be going into for a comment, poke me on the chat XD I'm usually not this rantish this late at night.

[dldzioba]

Yay! A comment.

[pherring]

The first reminds me of a short I think I saw on Sundance Channel once.... Its a bit creepy but I tend to like it muchlymuchness.....

The second reminds me of something a girlfriend might say about her boyfriend... I like it its warm, and fuzzy, and cuddly, and reminds me a bit of warm fuzzy feelings in my middle :)

[dldzioba]

Water are the ultimate fickle lover.

As for that. I like it too. I have a thing for voices in reality so I had NO problems writing this.