Multi-part: Breathe (17)

[dkzen_ramblings]

Title: Breathe (17)
Pairings: Matsumoto Jun, Ikuta Toma
Rating: R
Genre: AU, angst, romance
A/N: Lyrics from "Be With You" as sung by Arashi

Comments

[salwaphoenix]

boo

[salwaphoenix]

YATTA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[salwaphoenix]

i really thought somehow jun and sho will get back together >.<

BUT ANYWAY, SHUN, JUST BRING THE LUBE AND CONDOMS!
*cough*they'rejusttooshytosayit*cough*

"BROS BEFORE HOES!!!!!"
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA xD Shun's a lil bit lonely, isn't he? But I like the threesome as best friends, and how Jun and Toma are very accommodating towards Shun :)

AND I'M FINALLY AT THE TOP SPOT!!!

[dkzen_ramblings]

oh man...you are soooo sadistic for wanting jun to get back with sho. >___< LOL!!! ♥ ♥

shun doesnt need to bring any; im sure they have their own....ahahahaha. and he just likes to be a jerk anyway. LOL he's all talk.

[yukichan_tb]

Yayyyy!!
Urrah for Toma! :D

And Shun is really something great... please keep going on like this ^^

[daisuki_dkzen]

\o/ go Toma!! ♥

I love Shun to death...the real one and the one I've made up. LOL.

thanks so much for reading!

[miquilis]

wait... wait... WAIT!!!! Jun isn't ending up with Sho? what the hell?! You lure me over here, turn Sho into a bastard and make us all fall in love with Toma and that's how we're ending it? Okay, I know Sho's a tool but I thought he was going to redeem himself >_< I don't know how actually ever could but I don't like ending it with still so much anger towards him - but please don't make them suddenly become friends again because when you go through a break up like this there's no way you can back to being friends, you either sort out your shit and get back together or you pretend the other person just doesn't exist.

on a side note, Shun was awesome in this chapter... Bros Before Hos!!! ('cause we all know Jun's the best ho) and getting lonely when someone takes his Tomanator away <3 <3 there needs to be some friendly threesome cuddling - plus I love Jun suddenly being exposed to the dirtiness that is Shun and Toma's texts ^^

[daisuki_dkzen]

ROFL your comments always make me LOL! ♥

so, not only have i turned everyone onto the cuticle that is Toma, i have also got myself hooked on the guy. -__- (SHO IM SORRY!!!)

Shun is awesome and just takes the utmost pleasure in harassing the nice guy, that is Toma. The fact that Shun is a dirty ass will clearly become apparent to Jun. LOL.

THANK YOU FOR THE AWESOME COMMENT!!!! ♥

[cherry_armrest]

I'm boooored too XD

I agree with Shun, entertain us! (by f*** all day. hahahaha)

[daisuki_dkzen]

ROFL - dont be surprised if Shun actually suggests this. AHAHAHA...or maybe he already has... *snorts*

Jun: Shun, dear...this is not some kind of sleazy whore house where you can get your jollies off for free.
Shun: Oh...so you want me to pay then?! *LOL*
Toma: -____-# when i kill you, its going to be slow..and painful...
Shun: BRING IT LITTLE MAN!!!

[cherry_armrest]

LMAO

MOAR SHUN PLZ! <3

I'll help him pay, I promise! XDD

[dkzen_ramblings]

ROFLMAO!

id help shun pay too...or maybe id pay shun to distract jun....AHAHAHAHA!

[desirer91]

Sorry if I didn't review last time, but I was too anxious because this week we had to be given the subjects and the teachers for our hs senior year exam (in fact we got them today)...so I really had other things in my mind (rl always wins over fandom...unfortunately...).
Anyhow...it's almost over? ...that's a shame...I'll miss this story of yours...the sakumoto you wrote was so angsty....and I loved it just because of that! Same goes with the genius character, Shun...in this chapter I really wanted him to be my best buddie...
And Mom and Dad are so great^^ I kinda miss them...(is it wrong saying I miss Sho too?).
Thanks for this wonderful fic and (I hope) for the next ones.
-de-

[daisuki_dkzen]

dont worry about not being able to comment; RL before fandom. :3

im kinda sad that its almost over too...but i havent had enough of the bromance yet. ill probably write a bunch of sidestories for this LOL im not ready to let go yet!!!

thanks so much for reading!