To Be Alone (With You): Chapter Four

[dizzycalm]

Title: To Be Alone (With You): Chapter Four
Author: dizzycalm beta'd by the lovely Madneto
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: alcoholism
Author's Note: This is a WIP and the first time I've written such a long fic. Hopefully each new chapter will be posted on either Wednesday or Thursdays each week.
Summary: Based on this prompt which I wrote and decided to

Comments

[nathcoelho]

i hope charles really get his fellings sort out soon.
poor erik
but its good they are talking
xD
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[tea_and_trifles]

Oh, my heart ached for Erik in this chapter! But I loved the way you wove in Raven; how she really wants to be their friend, not a rival. And I'm glad that Charles is letting himself get close to Erik again. But... but... Shaw Grocery! That can't be good. I am so worried about Erik now. *bites fingernails nervously*

[crimsoncrow]

........QUITE NOW ERIK!! QUITE! NOTHING GOOD CAN COME OF THIS! NOTHING!!!!!!! I'm going to have nightmares about Erik being taken to some secret room and disappearing for a really long time.

Blah, and I'm glad Erik didn't take it out on Raven. Charles was going about this really wrong, and risked Erik taking that out on Raven hardcore. Raven is awesome though, so that didn't happen. Everyone is just...so young. And Charles fears are just so sad with someone so young. And this is all so sad for Erik. And I feel like it will get worse.....Because...Shaw Grocery.

[nevercheshire]

I just love your writing, all the wonderful details (the stocking shelves is one of my favorites :) makes it come alive!

[rumcity]

God how i love this fic. Charles is really scared come on man up and just accept miserable Erik ;(
Great Fic! Cant wait for next update!!!