♠ Original Fiction; Average, Even

[theepiccek]

Average, even
rating/word count: m - 1999 words
summary: Two years, four months and seventeen days. That’s how long it’s been since she was loved back. After the nine-month mark, she started existing in a state of perpetual unrequitedness.
notes: for: fireworkfiasco @ inrevelations #5 ( prompt) I hope you like this. I had fun writing it, your prompt was really

Comments

[theepiccek]

thank you so much!

[only_for_one]

This is so bittersweet and beautiful. I love the way it's written; you've done a fantastic job!

[theepiccek]

Thank you so much ♥ how are you?

[only_for_one]

I'm doing really well, busy, but well. How are you?

[theepiccek]

I'm on easter holiday at the moment, but I have this Bio Assignment due in... 6 days & I haven't started, so I'm freaking out a little haha

[theepiccek]

ty ♥

[theepiccek]

dude, don't worry about it! I posted early so I wasn't scrambling to finish when I had essays due.

I'm so glad you liked it! I was seriously so daunted when I saw I was writing for you, because, holy crap i love your writing.

[lusimeles]

This is very cool - I love the way you formatted this, and I love the way you unwound the story (if that makes any sense). This quote in particular stood out to me:

One day, Jenny wakes up from a decade long dream and finally understands the difference between loving someone, and wishing you did. For so long, he seemed so important that he became the pillar for everything to measure up to.

Because it's so eloquently (yet pithily!) put, and feels so, so true. It's great that you worked within the 'not-quite-fairytales' theme (this feels tightly plotted, even though the bits and pieces almost don't seem to relate at first). I'm glad Jenny grew up in the end!