Character Work, Veta, part 2.

May 06, 2003 01:14


(Please read in order, all drafts can be found in the jelisaveta tag.)
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A Small Detail ... goddice May 6 2003, 13:56:56 UTC
I will double-check, but I believe our (speaking as Kindred) fangs are retractable. It does little good to promulgate a masquerade if we can't hide our fangs ( ... )

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Re: A Small Detail ... diziara May 6 2003, 14:59:59 UTC
Okay, yeah... let me know about the fangs. It makes sense, I just didn't think about it.

...as for the name thing, I had chosen one, and placed it in there... However, I apparently didn't make it clear enough who it was. 'Twas a big todo last night while I was typing it up... I had to hunt down a name I approved of, however, I should get a last name too. Gavril is his first name... we'll work on the rest of it shortly.

I might expand this piece into part of what I put into the next one... but we'll see what happens when I have time.

Thanks for the feedback.
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rj_bastard May 7 2003, 00:03:51 UTC
I like. No specific feedback right now, but I really like these.

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