This is lovely. I can tell it's a bit rushed in places (your tenses flip all over the place on occasion) but it has such a nice mix of darkness and light. And of course, the theme of tea and coffee running throughout, linking everything together is just the icing on the cake.
Hahahah, yeah, I like it overall, but I knew my tenses were crap! I started out in present, then went back and tried to change it to past, but wanted to leave the last paragraph as present day. It was special, but enjoyable to write! Thank ya ma'am!
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Beautiful.
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