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[divide_et_imper]

Hey Boils and Ghouls.

This is a thingie for english "classical essay" and whatnot. Read it, tell me if it's crap so I can quickly rewrite it for monday.

Thanks babes!

♥ Divi

Comments

[charades__]

did dewar mention anything about how formal this was supposed to be?

[divide_et_imper]

well, I didn't remember him saying anything like that, but when I looked in the book, it said its supposed to be towards an audience of peers, and that it can be in the first, seccond, or third person. *shrug* I think the classical essay is a really relaxed form.

[wonder_who171]

I really like the tone that this piece of writing carries with it. There are a few little mistakes that spell/grammer check will catch but beyond that it is a very good piece. And BTW! You WILL get the chance to see that all again, there will always be second chances if you try hard enough.

[rhiaofavalon]

Remember, it's not supposed to be perfectly edited because we're being marked on peer editing of them.. so leave it as it is, and give whoever marks it (me? lol) a chance! haha