Fic: Are you my destiny (being human)

[distraction16]

Title: Are you my destiny
Rating: R for violence and nastiness
Pairing: none. George and Mitchell
Disclaimer: They're not mine, they're Toby Whithouse's. But I don't think he would ever treat them so badly.
Warnings: Where to begin... This is a horrible fic. Contains character death, violence, intimidation. Very dark AU. Also spoiler for the beginning

Comments

[cieria]

:o I can see why writing this made you so upset.

Very good though.

[distraction16]

Yeah, hopefully it's out of my system now.

thankyou for not hating it *hugs*

[cieria]

I never hate good writing *hugs back* It is an interesting look at thing if Mitchell hadn't felt any sympathy for George. I quite like it, does that make me weird?

[distraction16]

no, it's not that that makes you weird! lol :-P

but no, at least I hope it doesn't make you weird cos then what would it make me?!

[phantomreviewer]

Oh God... evil!Mitchell.

I think it was the crushing of the glasses that did it for me, it was such an innocent sign in the episode a sign on acceptance and this is... so terribly dark.

He feels like he’s been waiting for this his whole life. And then it all goes black.

Oh ouch, poor George.

Oh Mitchell This is an animal cowering before him, not a human with a life and people left behind to mourn.

I think you've killed me.

I can't get dark!Mitchell out of my head!

And what an excellent fic!!!

[distraction16]

Thanks, I'm really glad I got a few positive responses so soon after posting it because I was feeling bad about the whole thing!
The idea started with an image of Mitchell crushing George's glasses that just popped into my head- weird.
Glad you liked and apologies for killing you!

[phantomreviewer]

A few? This story is brilliant in the oh-my-god-I-can't-believe-you-did-that kind of way.
And yes feel bad, but I spend almost all of my fic writing time trying to kill George (and never quite managing it (I love him really)) so you've set me a benchmark.

And oh, it's the glasses that have broken my heart, they were a symbol of peace and unity and friendship and acceptence and... reduced to wire and glass, in a dirty backalley awash with blood.

And the whole animal/human thing. So painful. The idea of being a pet a creature rather than human. And having tainted blood. And I really need to get some sleep...

I'll be having nightmares about evil!Mitchell now... And you're forgiven for killing me... I think. *covers neck*

And Lord's aren't I gushing?

That icon is not right for this fic... it'll have to be George in pain again.

[distraction16]

*is very flattered*

yes, I've noticed your attempts to kill George! I read the human chronicles with my heart in my mouth... I liked it.

Ok don't have nightmares! Read some fluff first :-)

[distraction16]

Thanks :-) I'm feeling reassured now.
George is just so helpless without his glasses...

[distraction16]

don't worry you make sense :-)

Yes george is definitely a bit like a pet, especially at first. But I think if Mitchell actually had killed George at this point, he would have done himself just as much damage as George, because he's just lost something that he never even knew he could have, if that makes sense. George is like Mitchell's constant, and he's never going to find another is he?

[dreamsofspike]

WOW...

sooooo dark, but beautiful... i can see why you found it disturbing, because it *is* disturbing... but this could have happened if george and mitchell had happened to meet at a worse time in mitchell's life... very well done, love, loved it ;)

[distraction16]

Thankyou, I'm really glad you liked it as you're such a connoisseur of dark yourself!