The Fool - Part 4

[disparagingrant]

Below is the next of The Fool. If you can't remember what the hey-ho I am talking about here is the link to the previous posts :) dr's memories.

Rating: R-ish
Unbetaed, read while wearing your spelling and grammar goggles on tolerance level = HIGH

Comments

[angylinni]

ouch you big teasing bint, way to leave it on an evil cliffhanger. Very good almost smut, the heat was nearly crackling off the page. When they do finally come together it's going to be explosive.

[disparagingrant]

When they do finally come together it's going to be explosive.

I simply refuse to write this part! I vow never to write smut again! Humph!

[angylinni]

why do you refuse? They've got heat between them, you just need to get them to both see it. Ginny's stubborn, make Draco whack her over the head with the desire.

[mynuet]

Lord, girl, that was SO damn hot, and SO damn frustrating. They're both so stubborn! I want to lock them in someplace with no clothes until they work things out or explode from the sexual tension and frustration. One of them has got to give, or they're just going to keep doing this dance ad infinitum untilI explode, and we don't want that, do we?

*looks at you suspiciously* DO we?

[disparagingrant]

Although the thought of writing this to drive you personally insane had crossed my mind, it is not the case. *wink*

I am merely testing my ebilness in small steps. Is it working? hehe

Thank you for your comments. *scurries off to write Mynuet's bunnie for D/G locked someplace nekkid*

[mynuet]

Aww, so much for my belief the entire world revolved around me. ;) And yes, your ebilness is coming along nicely young padawan. Soon you will be getting reviews/comments consisting entirely of death threats and the sound of hair being torn out in frustration, and that can be quite, quite fun. Not like I'd ever do that deliberately, oh no. *whistles innocently*

[disparagingrant]

*whistles innocently*

You are NOT being very subtle!

And I'll have you know that I've lost a lock or two over SB!

[gianfared]

Woo hoo! That was HAWT! I ♥ it!!!!!!

*fans self*

He left?!?!?! Damn him.

She let him?!?!?!?!? Damn her.

Look at the emotional trauma you've inflicted upon me through. :D

[disparagingrant]

Look at the emotional trauma you've inflicted upon me

Sorry 'bout that. *grins*

[dawnwood]

That was good, the tension was high. Poor Ginny, coming home to find him there and then actually managing to fight her urges and resist him.

I especially loved this paragraph: Draco stood, smoothing the creases from his robes not meeting her eye, "If you ask me to leave, I won't be back. I won't wait while you make up your mind what you want."

Thank you so much for sharing. And why does the tolerance need to be high?

Do you know...if I hadn't checked friends of friends I wouldn't have seen this...my friends' list has been so active that posts are moving to the second or third page before I even see them...I would have kicked myself had I missed this...

[disparagingrant]

I don't know why Ginny has to be so strong willed. Darn her anyhow.

Thank you for your comments. I asked for the High tolerance of grammar and spelling due to the fact that I am either stoopid or lazy when it comes to punctuation. I make an effort with spelling. Most of the time.

I'm glad you found this. I would have pouted incessantly if you hadn't come along and posted a comment. I can't believe how fast the flists went yesterday. I don't think I will catch up.

[burgosdamasco]

They are both so stubborn!!! Ginny he waited 2 years for you! And Draco left so easily! AAAH! Can't wait until the next chap

[disparagingrant]

They are both stubborn! Well suited for each other, don't you think?