SPOILERS - Frozen - Elsa/Hans
anonymous
December 15 2013, 06:27:37 UTC
When Hans gets back to the Southern Isles, his family is so disgusted with him that they disown him and send him back to Arendelle in chains - there's a tradition in the Southern Isles that punishment is determined at the hands of the victim, so that means he's Elsa's to do with what she will.
Elsa doesn't have the heart to kill him, and doesn't want to let him out of her sight - he might use that silver tongue of his to turn the guards against her - so she's at a loss as to what to do with him. Eventually, perhaps even without realising it at first, she discovers the answer is to domme the fuck out of him. (And then they both realise that they really like it oh no)
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anonymous
February 12 2014, 23:33:37 UTC
omg omg omg omg DARLING I LOVE YOU that is the greatest thing! omg i can't get over their expressions and the way Elsa is basically holding him up and just akldldga yes perfect, omg, YOU'RE AMAZING THANK YOU.
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anonymous
February 15 2014, 14:16:20 UTC
omg that is perfect i am both cackling delightedly and going AW MY POOR BABY you totally deserve that <333 i love how expressive your art is and the colours are GORGEOUS no worries about that
this is the best valentine i've ever received oh my goodness thank you so much, please accept the update in return as proof of my love? (and also please forgive me for taking so long to reply i wanted to get the next part up for valentines day and then failed completely orz)
(and replying to your other comment:) omg are you kidding me i think giving me even more art is the perfect response and i am genuinely clutching my face and making heart eyes at the screen because of you, so. i loved the sketchiness because it just made it all the more expressive and alive and just perfect, no worries, and i'm so thrilled my rambling squee came across well and you ARE AMAZING.
and eeeee oh my god thank you for your kind words, i'm so glad you like it and hans is an unrepentant snake omg yes he is the worst and i adore him and he's so much fun to write -
( ... )
um out of nervousness that i didn't come off as properly thankful or accepting your compliments in the last comment, i really, really appreciate the feedback and it feels so good that you like it (i was worried it might be a bit too sketchy). i've had an utterly crummy week and that you replied and said all that made it like a million times better-
and also your story is so great and elsa is so fierce and hans is an unrepentant snake and anna is so cheerful and i just love watching them interact and i wonder if we'll see hans's pov later on? wagh so good and poetic and well structured i keep shoving it at all my friends like read this it is my favorite
-it just really means a lot to me thank you T_________T
(FROZEN SPOILERS) the revelations in your skin [1/?]
anonymous
February 15 2014, 16:57:32 UTC
They bring him back in chains.
There's a commotion down by the docks at midday, raised voices loud enough to be heard up at the castle. By the time Elsa slips through the side entrance to the Great Hall there's the noise of a scuffle outside the main doors, and a boy in Southern Isles livery rushing up to her, red-faced and tripping over his words.
"Your Majesty," he starts, and bows so swiftly she flinches, expecting to hear a crack of bone. "I'm so sorry, we sent an envoy to explain but it would seem they never arrived and it appears you had no idea we were bringing him, but we can't possibly leave again without-"
Elsa raises a hand to stop him, calm him, something, and he splutters into a silence that echoes around the hall. There's a note of panic beating solidly in her chest, because something is wrong, everyone is staring at her wide-eyed and watchful, and she swallows down the instinct to run when the familiar weight of expectation settles on her shoulders like a shawl. Her face shifts calm and content - everyone's looking
( ... )
(FROZEN SPOILERS) the revelations in your skin [2/?]
anonymous
February 15 2014, 16:58:36 UTC
"Prince Hans" she says, trailing off like a question and almost gently as she tilts her head to the side, frowning. "I'm supposed to punish you?"
"Queen Elsa," he starts, catching her eye before bowing his head. "If I may ease your burden - how about just letting me go?" he says, gazing up at her wide-eyed and guileless, a perfect imitation of innocence, and Elsa bites down on the rush of loathing and rises from her throne like a storm.
"You tried to kill me," Elsa says, cold and strong and each word like a blow as she stalks forward and grabs his chin, forcing him to look up at her. The room drops cooler, ice crackling on the windowpanes, but she doesn't notice.
"Sorry?" he tries, and grins like a question mark. He looks terrified close up, eyes so wide and darting endlessly between her and the throne and the frost covering the windows, and his uneasy smile just makes him look like an idiot
( ... )
(FROZEN SPOILERS) the revelations in your skin [3/?]
anonymous
February 15 2014, 16:59:42 UTC
"Well, apparently it's that or kill me," he says lightly, a little strangled and breathless, but his eyes are dark and pained-narrow and fixed on hers. His head pushes into her hand as he tries to lever up away from the floor, the cold snapping at his shins
( ... )
Elsa doesn't have the heart to kill him, and doesn't want to let him out of her sight - he might use that silver tongue of his to turn the guards against her - so she's at a loss as to what to do with him. Eventually, perhaps even without realising it at first, she discovers the answer is to domme the fuck out of him. (And then they both realise that they really like it oh no)
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(i'm sorry if these colors are bad this screen is not good at helping me judge oops)
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this is the best valentine i've ever received oh my goodness thank you so much, please accept the update in return as proof of my love? (and also please forgive me for taking so long to reply i wanted to get the next part up for valentines day and then failed completely orz)
(and replying to your other comment:) omg are you kidding me i think giving me even more art is the perfect response and i am genuinely clutching my face and making heart eyes at the screen because of you, so. i loved the sketchiness because it just made it all the more expressive and alive and just perfect, no worries, and i'm so thrilled my rambling squee came across well and you ARE AMAZING.
and eeeee oh my god thank you for your kind words, i'm so glad you like it and hans is an unrepentant snake omg yes he is the worst and i adore him and he's so much fun to write - ( ... )
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oh no i'm sorry! :( i didn't know that rule, will keep in mind in the future.
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and also your story is so great and elsa is so fierce and hans is an unrepentant snake and anna is so cheerful and i just love watching them interact and i wonder if we'll see hans's pov later on? wagh so good and poetic and well structured i keep shoving it at all my friends like read this it is my favorite
-it just really means a lot to me thank you T_________T
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There's a commotion down by the docks at midday, raised voices loud enough to be heard up at the castle. By the time Elsa slips through the side entrance to the Great Hall there's the noise of a scuffle outside the main doors, and a boy in Southern Isles livery rushing up to her, red-faced and tripping over his words.
"Your Majesty," he starts, and bows so swiftly she flinches, expecting to hear a crack of bone. "I'm so sorry, we sent an envoy to explain but it would seem they never arrived and it appears you had no idea we were bringing him, but we can't possibly leave again without-"
Elsa raises a hand to stop him, calm him, something, and he splutters into a silence that echoes around the hall. There's a note of panic beating solidly in her chest, because something is wrong, everyone is staring at her wide-eyed and watchful, and she swallows down the instinct to run when the familiar weight of expectation settles on her shoulders like a shawl. Her face shifts calm and content - everyone's looking ( ... )
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"Queen Elsa," he starts, catching her eye before bowing his head. "If I may ease your burden - how about just letting me go?" he says, gazing up at her wide-eyed and guileless, a perfect imitation of innocence, and Elsa bites down on the rush of loathing and rises from her throne like a storm.
"You tried to kill me," Elsa says, cold and strong and each word like a blow as she stalks forward and grabs his chin, forcing him to look up at her. The room drops cooler, ice crackling on the windowpanes, but she doesn't notice.
"Sorry?" he tries, and grins like a question mark. He looks terrified close up, eyes so wide and darting endlessly between her and the throne and the frost covering the windows, and his uneasy smile just makes him look like an idiot ( ... )
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